Very interesting :) Can't wait for more :)
March 30th, 2012 at 06:24am
Four Lines. - Comments
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OMG HE SAID HE LOVED HER OMFG!!!!!December 26th, 2011 at 05:07pm
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Aaaaah where is chapter 8 I need it pretty pleaseDecember 23rd, 2011 at 01:16pm
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Team coffee shop guy by the way.December 8th, 2011 at 08:07am
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If I ever become a character I neeeeeeeeeeed to be named Star Shine Moon Child and have rainbow hair and ride a unicorn to school. And I need to be the daughter of Paul Mc. and a mermaid.December 8th, 2011 at 08:07am
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He's so bipolar! One minute he hates her and the next time he's all sweet and careful :( The dream had to mean something I can't wait to see how he reacts to it!December 8th, 2011 at 04:12am
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Ugh why did he hit her!!! I just wanna jump in your story and strangle him! Lol update soon!! :DDecember 6th, 2011 at 10:40pm
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Wow Ryan is a jerk! I hope Caden becomes a main character :)December 6th, 2011 at 09:06pm
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Really like this, I'd love to see pictures of the characters though :)December 5th, 2011 at 07:31pm
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Ugh that guy was a total pervert! But atleast Alex saved the day :DDecember 5th, 2011 at 04:17am
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Subscribed - keep it going! (:December 5th, 2011 at 03:59am
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Aww she made a friend! And i'm just dying to know why he hates her so much I mean c'mon they were friends no? Update soon! :)December 5th, 2011 at 03:12am
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I think the chapter is good, but I also think you should add more to it. Not more detail, but more to what happens. Instead of keeping her in the car at the end of the chapter, write what happens at school. I look forward to reading more. It is really good. Thank you.(:July 24th, 2011 at 07:02am
