This Is My Ghost Adventures - Comments

Zak you ass. Please update

Oh my god ur right...touchy subject indeed.i started tearing up... i cant wait for more

I've only read the 1st chapter but I already like the idea. I think it'd be better though if: the sentences didn't drag or weren't choppy, and if it just flowed better. Maybe if you had someone read/edit it before you posted it. Like I said, I like the idea, there's nothing wrong with that, it's just your structure. :)

love it! please update soon

Aw... That was sweet, though expensive...

I wonder where he is taking her....

I would have reacted the same way as her....

Awh... She's sick... And I wish I could afford a full body massage.... It sounds nice... -curls up in bed pouting- Anyway, I'm actually glad you have her as sick. Usually, when people have the main character throw up, it's all "Their pregnant!" Such a refreshing change of pace....

She's pregnant. Lol, it is so obvious. xD

Why?!?!?! Why did you wait so long?!?!?! Grah!!!!! But aaaaawwwwww~! I want Winter!!!!! And please update soon! I am in love with this story and wanna kill her dad and I love how you point out things about Zak like him being bossy!

Why?!?!?! Why did you wait so long?!?!?! Grah!!!!! But aaaaawwwwww~! I want Winter!!!!! And please update soon! I am in love with this story and wanna kill her dad and I love how you point out things about Zak like him being bossy!

I plan on reading this when I get spare time and if I remember. I adore ghost adventures.

So cute..... And romantic.... And, KIIIIITTTTTYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry, I really love cats)

Aww that was so romantic

Yayaa!

i love this story plz update :)

I think you should update soon :]
I really like this story!