Sounds of Rain - Comments

such a lovely story :)

Ok your stories are making me an addict! I just loved this! One of the best stories I've ever read, really. Congrats, your writing style is amazing, you have a gift.

I love your descriptions - your detail is grand! This definitely not lacking anything in the development department. I actually really like your style - it's different than most. The only suggestion I have is to space out your paragraphs and dialogue. It's a little crammed together and can be intimidating to look at as a whole. Try double spacing to make it look neater. Otherwise, this was great!

awe, this was so cute (:
i loved how you used the name Ireland. i always thought of it as a girl's name, personally, but i'm actually really starting to like it as a boy's name. anyway. i like how you used the picture. the whole hand-reading thing. it was endearing, in a sense, especially since it later relates to the story. i think my favorite chapter was....the third. yeah, that one. as for the others, well, i liked the second one too (: it was cute and original how they met.
then of course i was extremely sad during the fourth chapter, and halfway through the fifth, i was extremely happy. seriously, i smiled like this ==> :]
i am a sucker for happy endings, so y'know, i was a sucker for this ;D plus the ending scene, well, i'm not the biggest fan on a bunch of smut, so when you gave that lovin', but did it in a conservative way, and it wasn't over done, that was a plus, because it made me smile, and awe, and just, you know!
thank you for getting this in on time, and i very much enjoyed it (:

:O......... A random person out in the woods?
To make out with?
That sounds fun. >=D

I really like the sound of this =]
can't wait to see what happens!

Aww poor ireland I hope he finds someone to hang out with :D
Cute story update soon?