Taking Chances - Comments

Yes you do love him Watkins, yes you do! Bless him tho aw. You are perfect and so is this story. I love the style of writing and you have Ian down to a T imo. X

Oh, naughty Ian and poor Sean :s
I really like this story, its not the typical Ian and Sean get together and live happily ever after.
Keep up the good work :)

Is it bad i'm dying already? i think so.
YOU'RE SO PERFECT I LOVE YOU. X

Woah, this is really good so far! I haven't seen any good Sean & Ian stories in quite some time. Your writing style is fabulous- it doesn't exclude detsils or overuse them. So far, I think Sean's my favorite character & I must say that I really enjoy the way he speaks & the way all of your characters talk & interact amongst them. Gavin reminds me faintly of my friend Kyle, whom I sit at lunch with a good amount of days. Gavin, although not under the spotlight like Ian & Sean, is an awesome character & I'd love to see more of him. Also, more action betwen Ian & Sean because it's hot when you write it. Great story!

It's awesome :D I really like your writing, it's actually...in depth, which is a nice change to a lot of stuff I see. I'm impressed :D

You're very good at capturing the image of a moment, which I love, as it really helps you watch what's happening, as well as just reading it, if that makes sense.

Very well done :)

I really like this already, it sounds a lot different than most Ian and Sean stories.
Can't wait for the next update :)