These Dreams Will Never Leave You - Comments

I like how Matt comes off somewhat reserved. Not just, flirting, yknow? Like he really, truly cares. If I could give you some advice, it might be to maybe slow down the time lapse a little.

Just a smudge, yknow? I thought it might've been too fast for her to get hit, get a taxi, go to California and already meet Matt all in the first chapter. Other than that, this story is pretty good. :D

I think you are an excellent writer! You spell everything correctly and use proper grammar which is a total plus in my books!

I like the way you get right to the point without spilling the whole story.

love the new update. i love how matt is so sweet to them

I love this so far. can't wait for more :)

Love the new update. Yay Jimmy is not dead. I love u s much for that. More please

Love the story. Please put Jimmy in it and not make him dead please. More please