September 25th, 2011 at 05:33pm
Save Me - Comments
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damn it is what i call a story cant wait to find out what happens when the girls show upAugust 27th, 2011 at 08:14am
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FUCK YEAH! another chapter! :D
i agree that matt has been super calm about this but i think you guys are just setting us up to believe it's michelle. i'm not sure who i think it is but i've got my eyes on the manager guy. however, i'm gonna wait until we get more into it to see who it is or begin to make accusations :)
Can't wait for more! love you guys!!!August 24th, 2011 at 02:20am -
I'm with that comment above^
I truly think it's Chelle buuuut maybe Matt or Johnny are helping her or telling her that Bri is with other girls or something.
I truly don't know which makes it even MOOOOORE awesome. I cannot wait for the next chappy.
Love yaAugust 23rd, 2011 at 04:29pm -
Yaaaay! Score one for me lol
I totally think it's Michelle but we shall see... =)
Hmm Matt does seem pretty calm about this now that the girls have been there for a little bit
at first I was 'nah he couldnt have anything to do with it' but now that Storm pointed it out, it does
make him kinda suspect lol and Johnny weel she was right about that too lol
I gotta though that this part
""Thank you my luscious flower." Jimmy smirked, looking Blaze up and down, no doubt imagining her naked."
Has to be one of the funniest damn things Ive ever read LOL! I just love Jimmy <3
awesome update! =)August 23rd, 2011 at 04:10pm -
I'm excited , I have to say eheh I think it was Michelle...August 23rd, 2011 at 02:53pm
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It is now I'm finally able to read it love and I must say I fucking loooove it. The plot is amazingly good.
I cannot wait for more.
Love ya
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I am loving this story. I've never read anything like it. The story line is so unique and I love how tough the girls are. I can't wait to read more! And thanks for recommending it to me! I definietly will be subscribing :DAugust 17th, 2011 at 03:04am
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Luffs it!!!!! more pleaseAugust 16th, 2011 at 09:00pm
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Wow, loving the new story! Please more soon! It's so new and exciting!August 16th, 2011 at 08:48pm
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I really like what you have so far.
Very thankful you sent me a link and I can't wait for more. I really hope Brian isn't lying because I want to see this pretend relationship shit (I like to play pretend too)August 16th, 2011 at 05:59am -
This is really good!
I am so happy it was recommeded(:
If you could find pictures that look like the girls that'd be awesome cause I keep forgetting who each on is.
Very original and creative, never would have thought of something like this. Keep writing cause I love it!August 15th, 2011 at 12:30am -
I love the story!!! thank you so much for recommending it to me! :) Subscribed! Can't wait to see what happenesAugust 14th, 2011 at 09:12pm
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It's great so far can't wait to see what happens. Maybe you can do
A chapter with the whole girlfriend arrangement thing if not fully then
Partially in Lea or Michelle's P.O.V? :)August 14th, 2011 at 07:40pm -
This is really good!August 14th, 2011 at 04:26pm
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Well well well, looks to me as though someone close to Brian is behind those emails, and let's face it, it ain't Pinkly!! Someone's going to be in for a world of pain over this, and if it's who I think it is then I'm grabbing me some popcorn and a front row seat for that show because that's something I do not want to miss :D I can't help but feel sorry for Brian with this situation, because as warped as those boys can be at times, sending threatening emails about themselves isn't something I can imagine any of them doing, and to be accused of it just when he's slowly starting to accept that Blaze, Storm and Rosie are there to protect them must be a blow.
And Blaze handcuffing Jimmy was sheer genius and funny as hell. Got to give Jimmy credit for the way he keeps trying to "seduce" Blaze though. It makes me want her to catch him completely off guard, turn the tables and do the same to him. His reaction would be priceless!!
Thank you both for being wonderful and writing this story. I think it's safe to say that I love it dearly, and would probably marry it given half a chance. I love you <3 xxxAugust 14th, 2011 at 11:19am -
Oh my damn! I couldnt tease Jimmy like that without getting turned on myself lol Blaze is a strong woman lol
the thing with the emails does seem pretty fishy...Might it be possible that Michelle is behind it?
if so I could kinda see how, I mean she could have heard about what the guys have been up to and maybe thought that the emails would get them to stop...though she did manage to make things worse because now the guys are trying to get in their bodyguards pants LOL!
Gah I love this story so much! you guys are doing very well with it =)
awesome update! =)August 13th, 2011 at 06:36pm -
wowowow I really like this story!! :D I just read all of the chapters now ! I'm very curious about all of this. And it's been funny. Jimmy is such a character xDD gotta love himAugust 13th, 2011 at 04:19pm
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Finally a small breakthrough between Brat..I mean Brian and Storm! Trust him to come up with the idea of them posing as their girlfriends though, even if it does seem like a good cover story. It's going to make an interesting scenario, especially as we already know that Storm is attracted to Brian, and I have a feeling that Zacky's right and that her feelings are reciprocated by Brian, he's just been pouting too much to let it shine through. And I really don't think Jimmy's going to have any kind of problem with it, considering his attraction to Blaze is as obvious as a smack in the face with a wet fish. I also sense something between Zack and Rosemary, they seem incredibly cute together.
I have to say I absolutely adore Jimmy in this story, his humour and constant wisecracks make me chuckle, and I love the way Blaze always has an answer for him. Those two would be magical together as a couple. In fact, Storm and Brian would be great..even if a little fiery :) I'm glad that it all seems to be finally sinking in with all of them that the girls are there for them and to protect them, not to do a job on their egos and make them look like idiots.
I always seem to say it, but once again my lovelies you've got me rambling on and probably making no sense whatsoever, but you only have yourselves to blame for coming together and writing a fantastic story that I grow to love more with each update. You work so well together and I can't wait for the next update <3 xxxAugust 13th, 2011 at 01:39am -
hmmm posing as girlfriends huh? oh this is bound to cause trouble lol
that was sweet of Matt getting Storm a different meal, always such the helpful guy =)
I actually think that the girlfriends plan will work and Im sure the guys will be more than willing lol
awesome update! =)August 10th, 2011 at 08:11pm
Seriously ladies, this story is just so amazing and I love it to absolute pieces. Thank you again for giving us something so damn enjoyable to read xxx <333