This Magic Moment - Comments

I seriously love this so so
Much!

I seriously love this so so
Much!

Loll Ryan and Darcie need to get together already! Lol

I absolutely loved this story! I'm really excited to start reading the sequel :)

Just finished and I will have to start the sequel tomorrow. Or maybe just read the first couple chapters tonight, lol. I think she should be with Bam though. Ahhh guess I will find out!

Just finished Chapter 22 and if I don't stop now, I'll never get any writing done! I can't wait to pick this up again and then move on to the sequel. Great writing!

I love this story so much! The last chapter with Johnny and Jeff was so good. You did an amazing job and I can't wait for a sequel :) I'd love it if Savannah and Johnny got together haha :)

I'm only just still starting, but wanted to comment to let you know that I've started reading! :D And I must say, that it's really great so far. I can't give much more feedback until I get more through it, but I will once I do! :D
But for now, it has a great start to it! :)

This chapter had me laughing so hard. I could picture it all, and like it was said 'the Jackass commentary'. So many good parts! Ryan on Dico's lap, the tiger balm...just everything. Thanks for the great laugh, I really needed it. Brilliant chapter, can't wait for more!

Two WONDERFUL, fun filled chapters. I love that get me laughing and giggling. And YES, you did get awwwws, from me for sure. Just love how you get everyone into the chapters. LOVES IT. Keep writing becuase you are doing an awesom, fantstic job.

Ohhhhhhhhhh, I love it! It's so very VLB and Jackass, which I adore. Looking forward to more though and hope to see much more writing from you. Wonderful job :)

This has been a real good read... right up to the point you said it was finished! I also know that you said you'd continue the story but as a sequel... But... It would be so much better as one long story? Obviously I'm going to read it whatever you decide to do, but I felt I should say that I believe you could continue to build on these 19 chapters in a seriously positive way. This story could only get better if you added to it, and it just doesn't feel ready for a sequel yet. It's my personal view and you can tell me where to get off, I don't mind, but I had to voice my opinion. Thank you for all your hard work so far, Alice xxx

This has been a real good read... right up to the point you said it was finished! I also know that you said you'd continue the story but as a sequel... But... It would be so much better as one long story? Obviously I'm going to read it whatever you decide to do, but I felt I should say that I believe you could continue to build on these 19 chapters in a seriously positive way. This story could only get better if you added to it, and it just doesn't feel ready for a sequel yet. It's my personal view and you can tell me where to get off, I don't mind, but I had to voice my opinion. Thank you for all your hard work so far, Alice xxx

I really like this :)
Update soon? :)

haha first comment, im liking this so far keep up the good work :)