We Only Breathe For So Long. - Comments

love it!

Ohmagey dey be siblins!!

Haha but seriously nice lead up to this and thanks for the update!(:

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!
That is all haha

omg.. seriously... update soon pleasee? omfg..... henry is her father... garrett is her step brother.. holy shit..

Yay update! Haha(: thank you!

Man I can't wait to find out why he hates her. Cause he's been a real asshole to her...

So amazing! I'm pretty stoked for the next update--not going to lie about it. Please continue it.

oh.... i went to keep reading to realize it was done.... well that sucks... update please :O This story is actually so good.....

nooo!!!
i love garrett so much but why does he always have to come and ruin everything :(
cant wait for more <3

Her time at school would be over before she knew it.. well, THAT'S a great happy thing to wake up to reading.. :C

Daisy.. that one word, just like, set it all off for me, Idk, I guess it's because of the song? Whether that was your intention or not, it fits really well .. yup.

I can't make up my mind about how I feel about Charlotte's mom, like, I understand being over protective and I think that I think it's a good thing, because y'know, it works, but still.. bleh.. i just need some time to figure this thing out... (;

Happy belated birthday baaaaabe! Definitely did not stay up until 10:30 because I had to write at 8am the next day, what the actual fudgery, right? Anyway, Pioneer is like sex, can you make love to an album? I totally would, but then i'd feel awkward, because it would be like making love to the maine and a bearded male wearing red lipstick..

anyway, yet another essay on your comments page.. maybe i'll even break page two with this baby? (;

Thank you for the update! very lovely(;

Sorry for continuously writing paragraphs on your comments page.. whoops.

Really liked this update, kind of calmed things down. It may be a bit rushed but, idk, it almost, suits it? Like, her time is limited and she wants it to last but things are moving so quickly that..
woah. woah. woah.
Excuse me while I get all "over analytical english teacher" on you..
:s
Haha, yea so, loved this chapter, but I'm with John, chocolate fudge and mango? Separately I love the flavours, together? eh, i'm not so sure :p

And Alex Gaskarth story? Yes! Please!

I've got my first set of finals in university next week so from here on out reading/commenting will be sporadic or non existent as right after finals I get my wisdom teeth out, btu I promise if I fall behind on commenting, i'll catch up!

This is sooooo goood

arhhh i really want to know why garrett hates her so much :(
but john is just such an amazing friend.
i want my own personal john.

cant wait for more <3

Gahhh... I wanna know what's wrong with her, and what's up with her and Garrett!!!
<3
Keep it going!!
Take your time... no need to rush! we'll wait!
<3

Where do I even begin to express my obsession with this story? Truly there is no other way to describe it other an an obsession, or addiction. I only just started.. and finished.. reading the few chapters that are/were posted and already I can feel myself aching for more! I need to find out what happens between Charlotte and John, how he is going to go about making up for knocking her right in the face. And Garrett obviously is in no way ready to forgive her for whatever happened, but most of all, I want to see where you take the medical issue, i'm assuming it's cancer, perhaps leukaemia.. I could be totally wrong.. XD

Anyway, this story is my addiction, and normally I don't encourage drug use, in this case, I think i'll go back on my word and BEG you to please fuel my addiction. D:

that was so sweet of john how he got all protective and mad at garrett
cannot wait for more <3

Just started reading and can't wait for more!! love it so far!

So love it! keep it going!! :D