Pieces of a Life - Comments

i cried like 7 times

I READ THIS WHOLE DAMN THING AND CRIED LIKE 4 TIMES YOU ARE SUCH AN UNBELIEVABLE WRITER, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS, I'M STILL FUCKING CRYING <3

AHHHHH OH MY GOSH THAT WAS SO SWEET
and i actually loved Evelyn's spiel bc Leila needed to hear that shit
overthinking and overanalyzing is so not good and i'm glad she got that through her thickass skull and went back to Alex eehehheh c:

So I literally found this story yesterday. It was on the Mibba homepage. And I've been checking out A. Gaskarth fan fiction lately and so I was like... why not? The person who gave an overall review was very convincing and had me interested, so I clicked on it. And somehow, I have managed to read the whole damn thing in the course of a day, really less than that because I started like, at around 5 p.m. yesterday. Don't ask me how, because I'm still not sure of that myself. I can't even remember the last time I did that, if I ever even did at all.
For starters, I think I kept reading because this was a DAMN GOOD story. Great, really. Oh my God. It was very frustrating at times and I actually found myself speaking aloud toward the end because I was like, "OH MY GOD, she's not going to do it, she's not going to do it..." and this was like, the chapter before she changed her mind so it was like she kind of started to and I was like, "NOOOOO."
Leila's character was so frustrating in general. But take that as a compliment because that really got me into the story because I was just wanting good to happen when things took a turn for the worst.
It had me emotional at parts, like specifically toward the end there but during the reading of the will I like bawled like a baby when it got to Leila's part.
I'm sad that I just now found this because I would've given you a lot more feedback throughout. :(
But, this was truly an amazing story and has left that nostalgic/sad feeling in me because it's finished. But I like the way you ended it. And really, it does deserve to end there because it just wrapped everything into a neat little bow.
Anyway, I'm currently going off of four hours of sleep because I got up early this morning to finish it. I am insane, but hey, this was pretty damn awesome. I mention that because I apologize now if any of this comment didn't make sense. I do not have the patience to worry about my grammar at the moment. XD
But yes, fabulous job. Recommended. And subscribed just for the hell of it and because hey, this story deserves it.
Well done. I wish I could write like you. You're going to be an actual author one day. :) And I'll probably be one of the many buying your books. :)

Absolutely beautiful. This story is lovely and I love your writing style. So glad I read this. :)

*crying from joy* This story was too amazing. I loved every minutes of it, you are such a talented writer!!! LEILA AND ALEX FOREVER.

Beautiful ending.

I love this. Please update soon. I'm dying with anticipation.

ok i mean i can kinda see where Leila's coming from, but i don't think it was right of her to test Alex to see if he'd come for her :((((( she can't expect some movie breakthrough, yenno?
BUT MAN, EVELYN AND ALEX UGH MY HEART IS BREAKING

ALEX WTF WHY DIDNT YOU GO AFTER HER YOU PRICK
UGH

IF SHE DOESNT SAY YES IM GOING TO PUNCH MY COMPUTER

p.s. LEILA YA BISH but ugh i feel u u just ain't ready but stilL YA BISH

p.s. LEILA YA BISH but ugh i feel u u just ain't ready but stilL YA BISH

LEILA U DUMBASS OMFG
NO
UGH U SO STOPID
U STOPID U KNOW????
but damn Evelyn is a bae omg u go homegirl u go
artistic misery omfg i'm crying stop this right now
THANK GOD YOU DIDN'T LEAVE OFF WITH A CLIFFHANGER (+ if u did imma ugh imma cut a bitch ok)
10 THINGS I HATE ABOUT YOU
OH MY GOODNESS
STOP THIS RIGHT NOW THAT MOVIE IS PERFECTION
BUT OMG HE'S SERENADING HER WITH JASON MRAZ??!!!?!??
/crying
/sobbing
/choking
/dies
oh my god
oh my goD HE'S PROPOSING OK DID NOT CALL THAT AT ALL?????
omg LeilA girl how can u do this??? THIS IS ALEX OK HE'S BEEN WITH U FOR HOW LONG UMMMMM

GODDAMNIT NO YOU BRING THAT NEXT
CHAPTER NOW GODDAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!

Omg what was thaaat? This is so perfect! Update soon pleeaaaaseeee xx

holy shit. that is all. it's perfect, update soon <3

I FUCKING HATE VANESSA
OMFG
I HATE HER SO MUCH
IDEC THAT SHE DIDN'T DO THIS OR WHATEVS BUT OH MY GOD
NO LEILA OMFG
she has to be able to dance! :((((((
oh my god stop this rn
I'm so emotional uGH

I'm literally devastated. I wanted to cry but I just couldn't because I was in pure shock. In the back of my mind I saw it coming and in a bittersweet way I'm glad she almost has no choice but to stay, however it is horrible because dancing was her only coping mechanism, as fucked up as it was. Wow. Dude.

god dammit finally alex. SAY IT TO HER PLEASE!! this was a really good chapter! I loved it :) update soon <3