Pieces of a Life - Comments

I love this story. Your writing is easily one of the best I've seen!

Absolutely my favorite story on this site, your writing is impeccable!

GODDAMN FUCKING LEILA IM GOING TO CUT HER SHE HAS EVERYTHING IN HER FUCKING LAP UGH. MONEY TALENT AND ALEX LIKE WHAT THE FUCK YOU IDIOT GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS YOU'RE IN LOVE WITH HIM AND HE'S THE ONLY THING BESDIES DANCE THAT MAKES YOU HAPPY. GOD FUCKING DAMNIT.

Sorry pardon me. I was in love with my boyfriend for two years before we finally admitted our feelings for eachother. It's 7 months for us tomorrow and I couldn't be happier. :3 sorry I just had to share

AWWWWW MOMMA GASKARTH
no omfg
no Alex no no no you have to know how to stop it
GO GETCHA GIRL
WHAT
ALL HELL BREAKS LOOSE
YOU CAN'T SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT AND EXPECT FOR IT TO HAVE NO REPERCUSSIONS

MEEP I'M SO EXCITED AHHHHHH
THEY HAD LEGIT LOVE SEX FOR ONE
and that will idk man I got the feels so
AW SHIT I'M YA CRUE

absolutely amazing! update soon <3

Wow. I've been following this story for over a year.

Holy shit! I know I said that I wanted drunken Alex-Leila sex, but goddamn that was better :3. Clearly being the pervert I am, I would have loved the detailed one, and I'm sure with your writing skills you would have made it beautiful instead of smutty which is ok in my book :). That's a lot of money though, Jesus!

This story makes me think of Backseat Serenade whenever I read it, I absolutely love it! You have amazingly descriptive writing without dragging anything out. I am obsessed with this story!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!

Get some Alex and Leila! But she's not going to leave Alex to dance again? Right? I mean can't she do both? Please say she won't leave, I'll cry if she leaves! And that was a lot of money her dad had... I wish I had at least a million dollars, because let's face it, it's everybody's dream.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

OW OWWWWWWWWW!
oh my god!
FINALLY. I am SO happy right now like oh my goodness.

i am in love with the way you write

wow i love the way you write and they way you express leila's personality and well it may or may not be 1:30am and the only reason im up is because i just had to read one more chapter! update soon!

my dear, you are such a brilliant writer. <3 I am in love with this story already! :D cannot wait til your next update. x

Holy shit this is good. You're writing style and I love the personality behind Leila and especially Alex. I always find it hard to devolve the boys characters, but you're doing an amazing job. *mind blown* *reads more*

I love it I love it I love it. I want more. I want Leila Alex drunk sex! Haha! It's perfect. Absolutely perfect.

Super amazing update!! :)

YIKES
I FEEL LIKE SOME BAD DECISIONS WILL BE MADE

loved the update!!