Pieces of a Life - Comments

  • asdfghjkqwerty

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    loved the update!!
    May 17th, 2013 at 05:14am
  • dropyouranchorwanker

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    I love this:) i really wanna see her and evelyn have a huge blowout. Then make up of course(:
    February 16th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • natttttt

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    honestly at a loss for words, you're amazing
    December 17th, 2012 at 08:48pm
  • BeautifulBreakdown

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    This is such a beautiful story and the writing in practically immaculate. Each chapter leaves me wanting to read more and find out all of the skeletons that are hidden in their closets. This is one of the best stories I have found on here and I can't wait to read more.
    December 17th, 2012 at 06:46pm
  • I_Am_Sherlocked

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    OMG this story is soooo good, but I can't help but despair at the fact that I know there'll be a brief hitch in Alex and Leila's friendship because of her thoughts on being back. If I'm not mistaken, and when it comes to Disney I rarely am as it was what I was brought up watching, Vanessa is named after the human Ursula becomes in the Little Mermaid, the one Eric was going to marry when he thought she was the girl with the voice.
    August 14th, 2012 at 08:03pm
  • Liza Ch.

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    Such a beautiful story! Can't wait for you to bust the closet's doors open and reveal all the goddamn skeletons. You told that Leila loved Sleeping Beauty, I would guess Vanessa is based on Maleficent. Nice layout, classy and all.
    August 14th, 2012 at 07:59pm
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    Eep! You mentione me<3 and also, Sleeping Beauty is my favorite fairy tale ever<3 I loved it but I want more!
    August 7th, 2012 at 06:42am
  • mistery gurl

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    as upset as everyone was about her leaving, it was something she had to do. i agree that she didnt do it the right way, but sometimes its what has to happen. i left all my friends and family behind to study. its horrible and i know how she feels, but the way i see it, is that its an opportunity that if you didnt do it, youd sit round asking 'what if?' lovely wee rant, cant wait for more soon :)
    July 30th, 2012 at 07:27am
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    It was spectacular as always<3 can't wait for the next one!
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • reinventlove54

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    oh. my. god. i just read this entire thing... and... im a ballet dancer... and a HUGE fan of Alex Gaskarth.. and you literally just wrote my dream story.... I'm in awe. I hope you update soon. I will TOTALLYYYY be here. I'm recommending.. and subscribing... and I will be back for more. holy hell.
    July 29th, 2012 at 07:09pm
  • mistery gurl

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    gahhh cant wait for more!!!
    July 26th, 2012 at 12:52pm
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    Grrrr I know there's so much foreshadowing and I want it solved! I mean I love suspense but I feel like you're dangling it right in my face D: MORE!
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it but im confused as to why she left....
    July 22nd, 2012 at 04:08am
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    Too much of you is never enough ;) see what I did there?
    July 4th, 2012 at 08:09am
  • mistery gurl

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    loving it so far :) *suscribed*
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:20am
  • FellSoHard

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    I really like the way you write. Looking forward to more :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 02:26pm
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    Heehe Hi, I'm twice as awkward and I love you and your writing. Can't wait for more<3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 06:10am
  • andloveisaword

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    This is magnificent. I can't get over how well it's written, how it's developing, the way you've written out the characters. This is just great, one of the best stories I've read on here, and I've read many, many great stories. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to where this may go.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 04:53am
  • summerstate

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    I AM SOOOO EXCITED FOR THIS OMFG OKAY ITS SO WELL WRITTEN AND POETIC AND PERFECT I LOVE YOU YES I AM NOT OVERREACTING
    June 26th, 2012 at 10:01pm
  • xShadows

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    Love it!! As a dancer and a huge All Time Low fan, i just know i'll be obsessed with this story :) Great work!
    June 26th, 2012 at 08:14am