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  • Laceration Gravity

    Laceration Gravity (200)

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    Cry This is beautiful
    February 28th, 2008 at 09:13pm
  • hot dang.

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    My review:

    First things first, this is incredible, truly perfect. There is no reason for you to be unsure of it, be proud!

    'How dare he change the minds of millions? He never bled, he never hurt, never murdered; he doesn't deserve the mere title of a hero! He was a lovestruck bumbling fool with his head up in the sky!'

    These lines really stuck out to me, it just puts so many images in my head. I could just imagine millions of people pointing the finger, blaming him.

    Throughout the story, you managed to keep the tone and really convey the feeling. Your description was just amazing, I could see every last detail in my head. You didn't overdo things though, it was the 'perfect' amount. Also in a weird way, it was a really gorey one-shot, which I really enjoyed.

    Basically, I'm hugely impressed, you're a really really talented writer.
    :]
    February 23rd, 2008 at 03:40pm
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