I Can Hear Your Heartbeat - Comments

Wow, this was just.... Wow. So little yet so much.

I believe that there has never been a writer before you who can put so much into so little words. You are such an inspiration. And I love how much meaning this piece has. It's going to haunt me with its beauty and emotion. I love how you can capture everything into only 62 words. It felt like I read so much more.

I have never seen anyone that was able to portray emotions quite like you. That was the shortest thing I've ever read on Mibba, but it was completely filled with emotion. This was sweet in a completely unobvious way.

That was 62 words? It felt like 1,000. You're brilliant.

That was adorable. So simple and so sweet :) Loved it.

This was really good..... basically the comment above me said everything I planed on saying so..... yeah....
Loved it <2+1

JAzz <2+1

I think this is really, really cute.
You've captured quite a lot of different emotions in something so short. You haven't even written them down, but you can still feel it as you're reading their tiny conversation.
This is probably one of my favourite drabbles on here.

drabble.
shortest thing i've written in awhile.

xoxox
-dru