Don't listen to a word they say, listen to your heart. - Comments

Great story :D

is this really your first story? it's amazing. it was one of the cutest things i've ever read. at first i didn't really realize that Marcus was a guy, i don't know why, but then i did realize it. xD there weren't really any mistake that i'm aware of and i totally think you should turn this into an actually story, i'd comment and read every chapter. (: i don't know what to say to express how much i loved this, but, i really did. :D excellent job on your one-shot and good luck in the contest.