It's in His Kiss - Comments

Keep writing and please update soon!!!

quiet by accident I stumbled upon this story. May I say very creative, totally orginal, wasnt what I was expecting from one so young I expected the usual teen stuff. Liked the layout and had me intrigued from the start. Well done, I must say think the lads should read this, would be great to see their reaction! x

I was wondering how long it would take you to find me, Holmes. It seems that the game is indeed afoot. let's see how long it takes you to solve my next puzzle. You have 2 months, I'm feeling generous today. I would wish you luck, but I really don't want you to miss this... JM

Okay, I don't really know who either of these guys are (though they seem pretty darn cool and adorable judging from your story) but I love this story. The 2 characters are adorable and the kisses make my stomach do back-flips (that sounds werid but its the truth) and that doesn't happen often. I'm really impressed with your writing and really want another update!

Watson, WATSON!!! it seems I am out done out commented and put fanned by a Mr Ryan Brownie this must be fixed immediately, call Mycroft and ask her of whom this line reminds one "girl opposite her, whom was tall and had brown hair pulled into a ponytail" as I am struggling to place her, now back to the matter at hand, a once again wonderfully written story of emotion and what I'm sure Mrs Huddson would refer to only as cuteness for loss of a better word I am inclined to agree with my own assumptions of what she would say, so to conclude Watson I once again admire your literal ability and to Mr Ryan Brownie I only have the message The Game is Afoot Mr Brownie be assured of that, SH xx

I comment waay too much on this story but i just had to say that If i wasn't gay, i would be in love with you!! :L Keep writing and pleeeeeeeeaaasssee update soon!!!

You're welcome ;)

Love it... All I'm saying. I might tell Cel about this next time I see him ;)

I disagree with Me Gusta \/ I think that the sentence structure is fine. Update soon!! xx :)

This seems really interesting: I've only read the first chapter and it has intrigued me :) I adore typical high-school scenes, they always seem to be the ones packed full of drama, so I have high hopes for this story. The only thing I would comment neagtively on is the basic sentence structures that you use. Perhaps you could be more descriptive with the setting and use less speech: it would make everything more vivid for the reader, and would surely boost their reading experience. Overall, it has a lot of potential and seems to have a good plot - well done!

I love this and cant wait for more! more kissing scenes please???

Well Watson it seems I have been put commented of late I shall have to rectify this, my I start Madame by simply thanking you for the mention within your witter's comment for I have nothing up the upmost respect for you and am deeply humbled by the pedistool of which you seem to place me and inquire about a step ladder, may I add as it was the initial objective of this comment to simply say how once again dumfounded by the skill i'n which you write and the stories it allows you to tell xx I shall leave you with one final thought to muse in my absence dear Watson and that is why are we friends as I do believe I keep killing gladstone ?? X SH

Chris Gilbertson = NOM Richard Wisker... he's MINE! I bagsie him!! (maybe you could have me and him making out?? :L) Love the update. shame tehres a lack of tyger action, but the richard being gay part more than makes up for it! Update soon!1 :)) xxx

hey there. It's my first comment. I would like to say OMG I LOVE YOU!! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!! Please update this soon... this is really good... I <3 Cealleach!! xx

I've been casually silently reading this for a while, but I see how Amy is getting quite enthusiastic about her comments, and this chapter deserved a comment, just cause Tyger is growing on me (:
And you commented on my article, so yeah.
I know I should write my Drarry, but I get side-tracked and I don't know what's going to happen and meh, I'll see what I can do :L

Well step one I second my last two comments currently residing above step two I would like to take a moment to deeply thank you for mentioning me in your comment love you too pal x step three it's a great chapter title it keeps one in mystery step four well AN ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER it still seems to amaze me how great they really are although I don't see why you are an amazing and talented writer I admire your work i will show you the story this one inspired back at school, thank you for being great generally Amy over and Out xx p.s what date is our first day back at school?

utterly lost for words i am just awe-struck HOW AMAZING WAS THAT? LIKE SUPER AMAZING i am not worthy of your presence i bow to the master I I I am just that was great loved every word great great great really love the almost kiss scene you have held back then no doubt will save it for another chapter well done great job as per usual great i am honoured to know such a great and talented writer xx can't wait for more x i have a quick question is it uncool or just plain stupid to comment anymore i seem to be the only one so the words #first comment# don't have the same effect or is it just me being paranoid again ok AMY OUT X (of her mind) LOVED CHAPTER 3

right where do i start well i guess i could start by saying OH MY GOD THANK IS A-BLOODY-MAZING LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT great well one brilliant job anymore tell me and i will be the first to read promise but going away soon so email me the next chapters lol lol lol xx