His Name Is Kirby Jones - Comments

  • vmusicforlove

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    That was a cute story. Tragic but realistic. We lose people we love and it breaks us down, but there's the people that help us get through it. The relationship between Kirby and zoey have that strong ground that would keep them together. I actually teared up a bit when the grandpa died because it reminded me of my grandmother's death.

    The relationship between the titian family is hard to find these days. There are times when we get so pissed off at our family members but we always have to remember that they're just lookin out for us (: well that was a really good story!
    March 16th, 2012 at 09:35am
  • this.is.bliss.

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    I thoroughly enjoyed this. It is absolutely adorable. I'll admit though, I liked Ronnie quite a bit and I personally would have gone for him instead of Kirby, though I did like his character as well. Some editing does need to be done, but overall I really love it. :)
    September 22nd, 2011 at 08:54pm
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    I absolutely love how you wrote Pops' death, I would love to die to music and with that much courage, like he did. I had to cry! Then when the ending came, my heart swelled with love for Zoey and Kirby : ) I completely loved the story and characters. Thanks for sharing; I love your writing!!!!!!!!
    September 6th, 2011 at 03:28am
  • akanevampire19

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    The story was so sweet and unique. I love it. ^.^ Nice work.
    September 5th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • moonlightkiss

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    it's so sad... but the story is great.
    August 31st, 2011 at 02:31am
  • akanevampire19

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    I think I'm gonna cry with the next chapter..... ='(
    August 31st, 2011 at 01:57am
  • Cinco de Jenna

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    It's so sad.
    But losing someone is too.
    I only have my gram on my mum's side and both on my dad's.
    I love this story by the way, it's amazing
    August 30th, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • temptation;

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    Poor Kennedy : [
    Not gonna lie, it made me tear up a little bit.
    Although, I'm excited to see what's going to go down with the brothers next chapter.
    August 20th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • MarriahShadz

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    That was such a great chapter, beautiful and sad.
    It was emotional without being too or over-emotional.
    I felt so bad for Kenny when he said he couldn't remember what his mom looked like. That was heartbreaking.
    And I'm glad that Drew has decided to stop being stupid about what he said to Zoey.
    I can't wait to read the next chapter.
    August 19th, 2011 at 11:41pm
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    I squealed because it was so cute!!! I'm glad lucas cussed out her brothers, cause they were being rediculous. Can't wait for the next update : )
    August 19th, 2011 at 04:00pm
  • draloliane

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    omg that was like the CUTEST thing omg ahha please update soon awww :) <333333333333333333333
    August 18th, 2011 at 03:22pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Well, wasn't that adorable? :3
    Gotta admit, I was a little nervous that neither Zoey's dad nor Lucas would approve of Kirby, but I'm glad that they did.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    August 17th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • temptation;

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    Aw dang, well I hope her brothers drown themselves in guilt and apologize eventually.
    I can't wait to see what's going to happen between her and her brothers next.
    August 16th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • draloliane

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwww thats cute :) i just cant believe how rude drew and tommy are being :/ but yay for an update please update again soon :) <3333333
    August 16th, 2011 at 01:07am
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwww thats cute :) i just cant believe how rude drew and tommy are being :/ but yay for an update please update again soon :) <3333333
    August 16th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • MarriahShadz

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    I really love this story.
    And I'm glad that Zoey was finally able to tell her dad and brothers and her and Kirby.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    August 15th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • draloliane

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    omg. they are so freaking cute and woooow... ronnie... anyways i just wanna see what happens when she tells her brothers .... :) <333333 update soon!!!!!!! :D
    August 15th, 2011 at 01:01am
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    Glad they fought over the phone, but I can't wait for some more Kirby and Zoey time!!! Update : )
    August 14th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • Slacktivist

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    I love this..
    Love that Kirby will fight anyone who hurts her.
    Soo cute!!
    Update soon Hun!
    August 13th, 2011 at 12:16pm
  • temptation;

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    They're soo cute, it's almost sickening c:
    I honestly wouldn't care about the brothers but I see where she's coming from
    August 13th, 2011 at 08:45am