I like the layout, it was light and airy and fun, but I didn't like the fact that the banner was so small. Maybe re-size the banner?
You wrote this: "I think I’ll miss you Lee a bit I thought to myself with much surprise." There's meant to be a comma between 'bit' and 'I'. :)
I spy a few grammatical errors but nothing that can't be corrected with the help of a beta and I like your descriptions, they're nice and descriptive without being overly so, and you might just want to slow down a bit, it's hard to keep up. But this is a fun, light, airy story and I can totally see this shaping up into a magnificent story, and I'm looking forward to it! Keep it up <3
So, here I am to comment on your story! It has a lot of potential, even if I don't know what is going on half the time. I don't see why Lee had so much to do with the story or anything...
It's going very fast, too, so it's hard to keep up. I don't really know what the story is about, since the summary was very vague, but it seems to have potential, all you would really need is to edit due to some punctuation errors and such...