Smoke - Comments

First off: Thank you for giving me your entry so quick. Brownie points for that.
Secondly: I love the layout. It's very neat and simple.

Then we come to the entry itself. In the beginning it felt a bit forced. There wasn't much description used, but as I can read in the comment above, you might have a problem with that. If that's the case, then I think you did a very good job.
The second paragraph and the other ones, flow more delicately. I enjoy your word use, they fit perfectly. I also love that how further you read, you seem to get to know more about her.
I think the last line is very, very strong. I love endings like that.

You will also get some more brownie points for the shortness of it.

A definite improvement from the first drabble, I can see here that you've got to terms with descriptive language and phrasing. Awesome! I liked this drabble, very much actually because it's rare that I enjoy and praise drabbles - but this was cool. I've never engaged in the activity before,but from what I've heard, you've got the mind frame down to a tea. I imagine if I were smoking like that, I'd question myself constantly why I was doing it but realistically wouldn't care.

Good luck in contests with this!

Hm, I actually really like this. Although I've never taken part in the activity, I'd imagine that that really is how one's mindset is during it - hating yourself for it at times, but having no urge to stop. It's very realistic, great job with this piece. And good simple layout, it adds nicely to the drabble :')