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  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved the update!!!
    but they cant separate.... not when they were just getting along!!
    August 21st, 2011 at 05:24am
  • Aaugustin

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    More ;)
    August 21st, 2011 at 03:26am
  • emmared FMT!

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    Her assumption was shot down as his navy-and-red plaid boxers came into view and she silently observed the one thing able to recon the force of his lust-worthy lips.

    I still wish her assumption wasn't shot down, and in fact, the kid was naked. Then they would have been even? ;)

    DO I EVEN REALLY HAVE TO EXPLAIN HOW MUCH I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FUC-FRIGGEN STORY?!?!?!.

    Love, as in, a word, one shares, while in private... and other demensionas... demons? ghosts.
    naked ghosts. poltergeist? LOL PEEVES THE POLTERGEIST FROM HARRY POTTER!!!!

    Just kidding, Nearly-Headless Nick is where it's at.

    <3
    August 21st, 2011 at 02:33am
  • just.breathe.

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    MORE PLEASE!!!! I love love love this!!! Their sarcastic additudes towards each other is amusing. I can't wait for much, much more! UPDATE AS SOON AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE... so soon.....please&thankyou
    August 19th, 2011 at 07:09am
  • stay.stronger.

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    MORE!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!! haha great update...... UPDATE SOON PLEASE
    August 19th, 2011 at 07:08am
  • Aaugustin

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    Update ;)
    August 19th, 2011 at 06:52am
  • Cupcake1

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    Great chapter!
    August 19th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • megpie12

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    I was just thinking when you were going to update. And I check my mail and there it is.
    Great update!! Loved it. Keep up the great work. :)
    August 19th, 2011 at 05:55am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    ahhhh love love loved the update!
    i love how they were sarcastic with each other at the beginning of the chapter!
    mmmm shirtless Sid... yes please! oh and they're sharing a bed... ;)
    this is gonna get good!
    August 19th, 2011 at 05:14am
  • simplymexx

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    I would totally pay to see him half naked. And this is from a diehard Flyers fan. Just... yes.
    August 19th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • emmared FMT!

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    Sidney Crosby shirtless.... I had to stop and take a deep breath at that part to control my whore-moans ;) LOL. thank you for updating before going running <3 i love you for it!!!
    this was good too, but now there is an un-opened bottle of wine resting in the cabin... this could lead to a fun night for the lonesome couple ;)
    August 19th, 2011 at 04:42am
  • emmared FMT!

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    Because when Sidney Crosby was hungry, Sidney Crosby was hungry.
    <3

    I’m all alone. It’s just me here. What happened last night was just some messed up sex dream.
    OH SIDNEY <3 i fucking love you kid.

    “I was kind of hoping you’d be gone by the time I got back.”
    “What a coincidence,” he said with feigned optimism. “So was I.”
    LOLOL

    “Gee, thanks. I’m not sure how I can repay you-”

    “How about by shutting up?” he retaliated almost reflexively
    As you said it, "snap ! sid you spitfire !

    there you go... my input on this chapter?

    FUCKING LOVELY!
    you made birthday girl proud ! <3
    August 16th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • weasleychick09

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    That was great! Although I am sad they got off on such a bad foot. I can't imagine Sidney being rude but Nora is getting back what she dishes out so I guess I can't blame the guy too much! Great update though and I can't wait for more!
    Also I checked out my picture that I thought was in the same place as your's but I realized its not. But I think I was in that spot so I am sure we have a picture somewhere. I mean I think we took about a thousand.
    But I will the picture up on my profile so you can check it out if you would like!
    Okay I am done!
    Amanda
    August 15th, 2011 at 09:08pm
  • just.breathe.

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    I am loving this so far and I am so jealous of Nora! I'm that girl that wouldn't mind if Sidney Crosby was accidentally booked for the same cabin haha :)
    August 15th, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • stay.stronger.

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    This is a very interesting story :) I really like it. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!
    August 15th, 2011 at 05:53pm
  • nessajc

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    The banter you have between your characters in your stories...well it's just amazing. Love it! Seriously. Ha Sidney making breakfast and doing the dishes. Dang! Me wants that. haha

    I can't wait to see what's going to happen, I can only imagine.

    I don't know how she does it, I mean the man saw her naked. If I was her I'd be all awkward. I admire that in her.

    Sex dream? Ugh! Such a guy. haha

    Update soon!
    August 15th, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved the new chapter!!
    both their sarcastic attitudes made this chapter that much more enjoyable for some reason!
    I wonder what hes gonna do while she's gone!
    August 15th, 2011 at 04:12pm
  • Cupcake1

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    Great chapter!!
    August 15th, 2011 at 01:38pm
  • casually.obsessed

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    I like it so far :)
    Good job with making the characters hate each other at first. It makes it seem uncliche and sappy so far.=
    August 15th, 2011 at 11:52am
  • stay.stronger.

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    I am soo excited for this story....I live in the Black Hills so I was happy to see this story.... UPDATE SOON PLZ!!
    August 15th, 2011 at 02:46am