Comment swap sent me here;; Honestly, when I realized that this was an Avenged Sevenfold, I didn't know if I wanted to read it. But despite my urge, I read on and was very impressed. The layout is nice and the only thing I had a problem with was a few spelling errors. Other than that, you're doing an amazing job. Keep it up, buttercup. :)
Hey there, I’m not really familiar with Avenge Sevenfold, but I’ve just read another fan-fic with them in it, so I know a little. As the commenter before me, apart from minor spelling mistakes and such, but your story all in all is pretty easy to read :)
Keep writing what you love, and others will love it too :) x
There are way too many A7x fics on Mibba, so I'm sorry to say that I didn't finish this one. Both of your writing techniques are great, but there are a lot of small spelling mistakes, (eg. breathe, sliver, blond). Overall though, it's pretty good, but just not the type of story I like to read.
This is really well written and has an awesome layout, however, it's not my kind of story per say. It seems awesome and super creative and I'll totally recommend this. I intend on proceeding to read this as well, because I adore your writing styles.
From comment swap. I don't usually like avenge sevenfold stories but this one seems promising. So far I have only read the first chapter but it seems pretty good and I like you writing style. Your banner is really pretty too lol. I'll check out the next chapter :)
I love this x'D Matt's finally getting to the point!! and hopefully Zack will start remembering more things :) Update soon, please. This is absolutely amazing :')
This story is so goooooood! Omg, it's so fuckin' perfect! :D I absolutely loved this chapter! What made Brian become so non-human? It’s… sad :’ Poor Zacky, seriously. Poor thing had been living through hell. Though it’s amazing how Matt is entering his life. Slowly, but entering nonetheless :) This is almost nerve-racking. I can’t wait for another chapter :3
Loooooooove it!!!!!! More more more! I love Zacky soo much and he needs to get his memories back soon! and Syn needs to be Brian again so him and Zachy can be together<3 poor gerard:,(
Oh God O.O I'm really scared about that vision and what Syn will do now that Zacky is gone :| Zacky's so fragile, damn :3 It really is cute, but it makes me hate Syn all the more for it. It's his fault Zacky's such a scared bunny after all :(
I really love this *^-^* Can’t wait for the next update!