Ever Ever After - Comments

  • cynicalqueen

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    This one-shot made me cry (in a good way, I promise)... the detail and the way you portrayed the emotions was just flawless Katelyn. It really is how someone hopes their wedding will be like, even me. Even if all it ever turns out to be is a dream or a wish. I loved this so much.
    August 31st, 2011 at 03:55pm
  • The Orange Monster

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    I love this little one-shot, it's completely heart-warming.
    I like the way you went back to little memories on her life (especially the 7 plasters bit) and how she had been dreaming for a perfect wedding for ever.
    Although, there's a bit of a confusion with David and Nora, I thought they were Mark's parents at first, until the toasts.

    I read your authors note at the end and the immediate thought that came to my head was 'How could some one die?!'
    July 29th, 2011 at 11:19pm