Cliff - Comments

The layout was really good...when I first saw the banner I was like, "Ooh, look,a belly flop!" Yeah, I know, funny, haha. The actual story was sad but really good. I loved how you used so few words to describe something that you can make a full one-shot out of. Great writing, and great job! (:

I liked it.
It made me think how much I like rollercoasters.

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So sad.
But i like how in so little words you made the point clear.
I like it o.o
nice layout by the way:)