Hmm wait.. I don't understand, if this continues then how come i've read it all before on I built my dreams on you? Gahh it dont matter i can't wait for the next update this is amazing!
I put off reading and commenting this for a few days until I knew I would have the time to read it properly and send you a nice comment, as you deserve.
The first thing I have to say is that I find it unbeleivable that this only has 32 comments, when it clearly deserves so much more. The amount of bad stories that get so many comments is ridiculous, and I find it stupid that an amazing story like this continues to go unrecognized.
ANYWAY
Loved that update, as usual. I find your writing style so simple to follow and easy to read.
That chapter was heart breaking, especially the start when Gerard felt so sad. He had worked so hard for it and no one deserves that money more then he did. To have it taken away from him was simply cruel.
The part I loved was how Frank didn't even care about the money, all he cared about was Gerard and I think that is why this story is so unique. I can clearly see those characters are actually in love with each other, and it is so beautiful. Its believable.
This is so depressing! it breaks my HEART! *sobs* Gerard HAS to find a way to make more money..BESIDES selling himself..i dunno where that came from, but it just seems like something a guy as desperate as him would do..
Its the simple things in life that satisfy them. Such as Gerard getting a simle joy out of having a few dollars.
They are richer then many many other men and women in the world, because they have love and so they are the luckiest of them all. I love how they appreciate that and never take that love for granted.
Oh and thats what I was going to say, I dont think this is dragging at all. I cant wait until Frank gets out and he can get some form of a job. I love how life is looking up for them.
New Reader This is amazing, you are such a talented writer. And no this fic isn't dragging, it's perfectly fine the way it is. I can't wait for the next update
Gah I feel really bad... but hopefully this will make up for it - and I promise to comment on every update from now on ^_^ -
Okay so this story is so heartfelt and moving, I've totally fallen head over heels with it for so many reasons.
Firstly, I adore the way you write, it's addictive and making the story that little bit more awesomely =)
Next - I simply love the relationship between Gee and Frankie it's written really well and you've really let the characters grow and expand with every chapter. It's so cute to see things finally looking up for them <3
Also, one of my favourite things is that it's realistic. The dialog isn't too dramatic, the characters arn't too perfect, and the situations link together and work in an amazing way ^_^
So in short, I simply adore every word that you write and I promise to comment on every chapter from now on =D Lot's of love Beth xoxo
Edit: Boo yah! Page Claim ^_^ I shall call it... Henry