Chapter two definitely better than chapter one. In my opinion. It almost seems better written. I'm not saying chapter one was bad it was just short and seemed abruptly ended. But I'm really excited to see where you take the story. Keep writing!! <3
I like the plot but I feel that the first bit you have written gets to the adopted part to quick. I feel like more should have went on between her thinking about possibly being adopted and her mom telling her she is. But I mean that's just me. I like the story line though. Keep it going! (: