I know this isn't much of a comment, but I can't say much on this yet until you get more into the storyline. Then maybe I can give more feedback. Getting past that, the character development so far seems very good.(:
I'm subscribing because the summary has captured my interest and I do wish to read more. I'm sorry this isn't at all helpful.
I'm subscribing because the summary has captured my interest and I do wish to read more.
I'm sorry this isn't at all helpful.