Playing With Fire - Comments

So I felt like I read some foreshadowing in the ending of this update. Chapter 8 she noticed someone- not Spencer(if I remember correctly) watching her at the grave yard. This update, during breakfast Spencer explains why he doesn't like carnivals/fairs. I think something is going to happen at this carnival/fair/thingy.

Why did Spencer follow her?
Im curious as to who that man is she met at the cemetery.
As to answer your prediction question; My prediction is that nothing will happen except both of them opening up a bit more and getting to know each other mentally.

THANK YOU!!! I live in Texas too and I don't understand why people think that people who live in Texas ride horses!... I mean I do cause my family owns some but its still a stupid thing for people to think! lol thanks for the awesome update.

I like that we are finally learning about her life. Military funerals always make me start crying even on TV shows where they are fake. Just something about them.

well i definitely liked this one as well. i want to see how they both play out. :)

oooh, i loved the updates! spencer's reactions were so cute :) ugh, spencer! why can't guys in real life be like him? -_______________________________________-
anywho.
i'm so glad i stayed up till 3 am to read this :) WELL WORTH THE LACK OF SLEEP :D <333

I loved the small interaction with Spencer!
So cute! :3
And I loved how Emily gave her card to her!
I'm crossing my fingers in hopes of a friendship between them two! :D

omg this is really good!! i'm so excited to see all the character growth! :D and i think you should have emily and morgan interrogate her ;)

Can't wait until the next chapter!
I'm so excited to see how the interrogation goes! :D

lol thank you for the recommendation :D
It's funny because I updated today :3
I wonder if Spencer a certain someone (Elizabeth) to his house and be all like,
No way, you drew this? Let's smooch.
But that's not in his character.
I enjoyed the chapter :)

I reeallyy like this story. Not gonna lie.

I love how Elizabeth isn't so in love with him and is kind of nerved with having him around. I also love how awkward you make Spencer, because even in CM he's awkward. Garcia came into the picture I smiled reeeallyy wide, I absolutely love her!

Hopefully you update soon! I want to see what's going to happen next!

Til next time! (:

I really like it so far, I love how adorable Spencer is and how Elizabeth has so much in common with him, but I also really like her roomie, Tara seems pretty awesome.
Here are some suggestions/typos, for chapter two;
Someone knocking on the door jolted me from my sleep.
the wording just doesn't seem right, it would be a bit better if you write, 'the sound of someone knocking on the door jolted me from my sleep'
The only sign that I had been was the book
not sure what you wanted to do with this, perhaps 'the only sign that I had been awake was the book-'
his shoes. But I didn't know what he was doing here.
I think you should make it, 'I rose my eyebrows, not sure what he was doing here'
"Oh okay." She said softly
Isn't the story in Elizabeth's POV?
He chuckily nervously.
Just a little spelling mistake, should be chuckled nervously
shook my head. Letting her
should be, 'my head, letting her'
Again, I really enjoyed this, there aren't that many Spencer Reid fanfics that are good, but I'm really enjoying this so far. I tried to help as much as possible, and I hope I helped you.
hope you update soon:)<3

I like this chapter cause it shows how adorable Spencer is :)

i like the way this story is going it has a good feel to it, and i've read some of your other stories so keep your chin up there good, good luck

I like it :) hopefully they see each other real soon!

Lovely Story :) I'm Glad to be the first commenter :)