Although I do love this chapter, I feel like its too much like the movie. Like don't get me wrong, I understand that's the point of this, but I feel as though the bar scene was the same but with different names, you should mix it up a little, like keep the theme, but throw in your own style of writing so people don't know what'll happen next. Sorry if I sound rude I don't mean to!
The boys are right...Mason is being pretty bitchy. I understand that she's frustrated with John but she's giving mixed signals and needs to be nicer. Plus it's obvious that she loves John more than she loves Luke.
Damn... I wish I'd been able to read that last chapter before it got deleted. Sigh.... It was sooo good!!!!! But, I understand the need to restart so, I'm hoping that I get an update soon!!!
Thank god for wifi at my shool so I'm now able to read it I'm so happy that they are back together and I hope only happiness comes for them and I love how paisley brings them together Can't wait for more <3
I just caught up with everything I missed and I teared up so bad during this latest one. I can't imagine how emotional the next one will be. I just want things to be back to normal again haha :) <3 Update,soon!
So John wants to fly out to New York but Mason's in Colorado? Things are getting crazy. If John goes to New York I have a feeling he'll run into Luke again which won't end well.
I just read the whole thing tonight and I could tell the beginning was just like sweet home Alabama and I LOVE that movie!! It's amazing, but one thing was I forget the chapter, but it talked about how they'd known one another since 8th grade', but the last chapter it said 12th grade? Maybe I read it wrong hahac: