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Oh, I swear, I’m completely oblivious when I’m reading smut

Anyway, phone sex! That would have been awkward as heck for James. Imagine sleeping peacefully only to wake up to your roommate having phone sex with his girlfriend. It’s definitely funny in my opinion. Well, if I was travelling for a long time and has some built up sexual frustration then I’d probably resort to phone sex too (If I was 10 years older though). It’s definitely tiring to go from one place to another and it can also cause homesickness.

What’s there to say that I haven’t already said This piece has the perfect balance of descriptions too! You don’t cease to pull your readers into your story. You’re painting pictures in our minds with those details. Truly, you’re an amazing writer

Contest Comment:
Phone sex, nice! That was so sweet and hot all at the same time! Oh my gosh and the ending was hilarious! Poor James I can only imagine how awkward that must have been! But anyway, I loved this!

Hotness: 8/10
Comprehension: 10/10
Grammar/Spelling:
+ 5 for no errors

So, be sure to check the contest thread sometime by the end of the week to see the results!

Comment swapper here. I don't know who Logan Henderson is but I do love me some smut! xD This was awesome. Your description and word choice is perfection. Normally I would cringe as something like this but it was written so beautifully that I enjoyed it instead. It was surprisingly romantic. And the ending made me laugh. Great job!

Oh my god. There may only be one chapter but that was amazing, the whole lot.

I have never come across a phone sex scene before but that one was simply brilliant, I love all the detail you've put into the chapter, they do say the first chapter is always the most important chapter :)

I love the banner, it's really pretty :3

You're a really good writer, your technique is exceptionally well, with the whole chapter.
I loved James' comment at the end, it just added the right amount of humour to the ending.

I normally don't read one shots, but this one was just amazing, keep up the good work :)

Holy-
That was freaking amazing. You are such a great writer, I love it. Not many BTR fanfictions are like his and it was the first time I've read a smutty one. The layout and banner is just beautiful and I hope to see future work like this. Good job c:

I don't know how I didn't find this story earlier! Comment swap. Led me here but I wish I would have found it earlier! I think this story had great detail and I love the way it was written. I like the way Logan described their vacation in south carolina. Please keep writing and updating! I will definately subscribe.

Firstly, the layout is gorgeous and I like how the banner has the same background as the actual story background. I find it less distracting.

I really liked the whole concept of the piece, with the light conversation between Kandi and Logan as it led up to the smut scene. There aren’t many phone sex fics on here, so I felt like I could appreciate this story a bit more. Your detail is excellent, I can’t really fault it but I like that there’s detail in everything -- not just in the sex scenes but in the smaller details as well. Your flow is impeccable as well. The ending with James’ comment made me laugh, and I thought it was a fitting ending to the piece. In general, I really, really liked this.

Okay, so I'm totally late, but a comment is a comment...
Anyways, this piece was definitely wonderful. It's one of the smuttier ones I've read, but definitely had great technique. I love that you brought the past into the couple's conversation. It read more like a novel than a one-shot, which is truly amazing. I'm really happy you entered this. Thanks so much.

wow, this was really good. i've read a few phone sex stories here and there but none of them were this good. and it wasn't just what you wrote, it's how you wrote it. you have a very good technique of writing and it's just amazing. plus, i loved the little comment at the end to add a twist of humor. great job on this story, i loved it (:

Hiya! I actually read your entry to the all dialogue contest and saw the link to this. PHENOMENAL. Holy crap, I loved it. The title- genius. The ending- even better! Gah, I could go on and on but I won't bore you. Um yeah. I guess that's it!