I think I liked the other one better, but this one was very good too. Your writing style is very unique and I like it a lot. Tommy seemed like a big asshole from the start and I'm upset with Adam for loving him. I loved the nickname glitterbaby that made me laugh. This story seemed a little humorous and even though I'm sure that wasn't your intent I really liked it.
October 23rd, 2011 at 06:02am