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I like it so far. Your writing is clear and easy to understand, which I love. I don't know too much about the band, but it seems as if you have a good handle on their personalities. It looks like it'll be very impressive when it gets deeper into the story. Nice job(:
This is a very good beginning to your story I'm a fan of Asking Alexandria, and had to read this! I like it and think this is a good start, Can't wait to read more! (:
I like it so far. Your writing is clear and easy to understand, which I love. I don't know too much about the band, but it seems as if you have a good handle on their personalities. It looks like it'll be very impressive when it gets deeper into the story. Nice job(: