Darling I Do - Comments

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AHHHH This is amazing! I so want to read more! Oliver is so fricken sweet (: I just want to hug him.
As a bookworm and had went through something like this with my ex I really know what she is going through. I hope that she finds out that saying something to Oliver will definitely help her through it (: Can't wait for more (:

I like the whole bookworm thing and your whole character's personality :) This is cute i think it's a nice little story you have here :) There are a few grammar mistakes but nothing major although it does take away from the story a little bit. Just go in there and get at fixing those mistakes

I really enjoy the fact that your main character is a bookworm. That made me smile. ;] So far I think you have a very cute story idea lined up. Definitely maintain your inspiration factor and continue to write!

Awe this is cute haha I must say I love Oliver already :3 he's so charming haha.
This is a nice story you have, original and interesting if I do say so myself! I did notice one or two mistakes. Like A Midsummer's Night Dream should've been cited how I wrote, since it's a play and all. I think you for got one of theses guys " somewhere too. Just thought I'd let you know! Keep up the good work!

Wow! This is amazing! Write more please!

Wow. This is amazing! I really like it! Write more please!!!! :squee:

Wow. This is completely and utterly adorable! I was looking for a story where I could just go "awwwww..." and I think I've found it. I was a little confused in chapter 3 when she mentioned "the misery that composed my heart", but overall the story just flows so well. I can tell you spent a lot of work on it. =)