You Fucking Forced Me to Say Goodbye - Comments

Very good chapter. I was stopped so many times when I was reading so it seemed a lot longer than it probably actually was. Lol. But it was really good. I feel bad for Jana. She is so damn young. You read this and you kind of forget how young she is. Shes just a damn kid, man. I feel bad that so much has happened to her in her short life. Hopefully her mom backs off and she can stay with Austin.

Great chapter! I cant wait to see what happens with her crazy mother. Intense! I missed this story, you need to update it more often!

Oooohhh, drama! Can't wait for that!

I really enjoy the Jami character. Now I think its time for Jana to get a nice guy in her life. Even if its just a guy friend. She needs to learn that all guys aren't scum.

Great chapter. More soon? Love u!

I liked this chapter. Jami seems like a fun shopping partner. She will be a good influence on Jana. I wish there could have been a little more of the happy bonding time, rather than going through the past stuff, but it was still good. They have something between them now to build on. The relationship between Austin and Jami was adorable too. :) more soon? Xxoo

And now its hurts my eyes to read cause of the blue under the bright pink....

Hi I would just like to mention that I can't read half of your story because of the fact that you wrote it in pink with a picture underneath it.

Sorry it took me so long. School and all.
Anyways, it was good. A little choppy like you mentioned, but good. I'm glad she's getting help and Austin's willing to help her like a father should. I just hope she can put it together for Stephanie. She's what should matter the most to Jana now.

Well I thought it was very good. I feel bad for Jana, but I feel like she's going to make some progress now. She could have either gone down a very ugly road, or gotten better after that horrible experience, and I'm glad that it seems that she's learning, and trying to get better. I think introducing the Jami character will be interesting as well. She needs someone in her life other than her father and her daughter. I really hope that her mother isn't a road block for her.

More soon?

For Chapter Six,

Yes, that was disgusting, but definitely well written! Ugh that man was nasty for violating her! I wouldn't know what to do if I was her. It's gotta be hard when the bastard has you at gun point! Thank God Mike was there to help her! That made the chapter! I hope she's all right!

For Chapter Five,

Yet again, Jana acts like a whore. It's no wonder why she gets herself stuck in yet another difficult situation by the end. I hope she's all right, but I really hope she learns a lesson or like twenty here. It was sweet of Austin's boys to ask him if he needs help. He definitely needs it!

For Chapter Four,

Damn, even after Austin giving her some stability, she still betrays him by going out and pulling her tricks. Ugh! It disgusts me! Hopefully one day she'll learn that it's not all about her, that she has a daughter who relies on her, not Austin, although, Stephanie is relying on Austin and it was adorable and sad when she said she'd never had her own bed before and got one. I hope what happened to Jana with that nasty man can bring her to her senses!

Intense much, inlaw? Lmao.

Fucking amazing chapter, babe! Omfg. I was so happy when Mike started pounding on that door. What was taking the cops so long, Jesus? They have one job to do. Lol.

Poor Jana. I hope nothing happens to her for killing that guy. He was a bad guy. He deserved to die. Fucking sicko.

Hopefully now she can get her stuff together and will let Austin take care of her. And she can take care of her baby.

Oh my eff, dude!!!! I wasn't expecting that. I was expecting one of austin's friends to come pick her up or something!!! I feel so bad for her little girl. She needs to let austin take care of her. Great update. See, I told you it wouldn't suck! Loveles you!!

I thought for sure she was going to get aressted! When she was walking down that street like that. I thought Austin was going to have to pick her up from jail.

That mother is fucking crazy. I just don't get her at all. Austin is being so good to that little girl. He's so sweet. I hope Jana doesn't screw things up!

Great chapter. More soon?

I'm sorry for not commenting for so long!
I loved this chapter. I love how we can see Jana's trying for her daughter and actually has some remote feelings for her situation. It's definitely evident that she wants to try harder for her daughter and provide her with a life she deserves. However, it seems as thought Jana has an anger problem because she freaks out on Stephanie at the drop of a hat. Yay! Austin's stepping in and hopefully going to show some more sense into Jana! A massive dose of parental guidance is what Jana needs. :)

More soon!?

Great update babe. It really gave a lot of character insight. And it gave a lot of insight into where the story is going to go. I'm glad that austin was strict with her, and took a stand. It showed that he's not going to be pushed around by her. Great job. More soon?

Jana's a horrible mother! My god! You don't hit a kid for being hungry, it's a natural instinct. Jana's obviously not very mature either. She has a kid, she needs to be an example for her kid. Plus, she walked out on a situation that needed to be resolved. But it will be interesting to see how everything plays out. I wonder what heather's going to do and how her engagement is going to affect things. Plus, I wonder how Austin is going to try to resolve things with Jana and if and when Jana will ever start taking care of her kid.
More soon?

The part when she told him, "we're not making any progress here," that cracked me up. I could just see her telling him that and him getting more and more exasperated with her. Poor Austin. LOL. What's up with that mother, dude? I didn't get her. And if Jana hated her kid so much, why did she take it with her when she left his house again? This is going to be such a good story. I already love it. I've missed reading and writing so much. I'm going to write today sometime, so look forward to that! Haha. j/k j/k.

Great chapter, babe. More soon? Love you! Huggles and kissles!

Good start! The story line is very interesting. This looks to be a good story. However, it is a little complex. I had a hard time understanding what happened with her father in the beginning, but I did get it at the end. Also, watch the use of "yours." When you said, "....You're daughter." It should have been, ".... Your daughter." I know you don't like corrections, but that one bugged me. More soon?

Woohoo, first comment!

I felt a little bad for Austin there, not gonna lie! I probably would have called the cops if some strange girl with a baby did that to me. Nice start. This is going to be a good story, I can tell. There are a lot of complexities to it. It's going to be interesting to see how it turns out.

More soon?