Just Married - Comments

This was so nice and sweet. You depicted their love well, and the tenderness involved. There was a definite characterization with Victoria; from what I could tell, she is a very wholesome and traditional woman who had been planning this very moment for a long time. As a matter of fact, your entire story was very wholesome and sweet for it being about sex.
Your writing style is also terrific, especially when you give the little details such as wiping away smudged eyeliner. Most writers forget the little details like that.

This was adorably cute, and I love reading wedding oneshots. There are not many and I love how sweet he was with her throughout the whole story. Carlos is one of my favorite members of BTR and this being Carlos added to it's appeal. ;) You're such a fantastic writer, but I'm sure you already knew that. Never stop writing!

I love this. So much.
Could you please write more Carlos one-shots? It would make me a very happy lady.
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Carlos just makes me happy on the inside :D good job! I am very Carlos-centric :)

I would just like to say that this is one of my favorite Carlos fics. It was so cute and perfect.

Great job! <3

this was just so beautiful.
despite the fact that most of it was a sex scene, it didn't feel overly smutty. the way you wrote it just made it seem tender and beautiful.
i loved it :)
thank you for entering. good luck