this sound awfully familiar....like the movie "Just Wright" with Queen Laitifah and Common the same exact thing happen...right down to the gas pump.pretty strange huh?
Don't like Ashley. At all. And since I am an Ashley, I never thought I'd say that. On another note, since I'm definitely built more like Emily, and I love seeing/reading about big girls in a positive light, I love this! Already subscribed and hoping your schedule allows you to update soon! :)
I just want you to know, I'll die if you don't update. I don't think you want that on your conscience, do you? Lol. But seriously, I love it. Please update soon? :)
Please please please update again soon! I'm really lovin' this story, the plot sounds really cool. I love the conflict that's going to happen in the love-triangle-that-hasn't-happened-yet. I just hope Sid doesn't act like a douche... but then again, that does make a good story. Please update soon! Your story is really good! :)
I love this story so very much; and I'm not even going to complain about updates, because I am just as bad - if not worse. I love that you didn't write Ashley like a total bitch. In most movies or stories that involve a bigger girl as the protagonist, they almost always write the other girl as a self-centered psycho bitch. It drives me crazy - like a guy couldn't fall for a big girl unless his only other option was a crazy lady. But, anyway, my point is, I like that she isn't crazy in this. =]
I loved the new chapter and you definitely make it so much easier to like Ashley than the real girl from the movie. I am really happy that she got Emily invited to hang out with the team. I really hope that she is a good person, but what would be a good story without some conflict. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
So, I'm really kind of excited for this story! I'm really loving the story line, and while I've never actually seen the movie, I can tell this is going to be a good story! I'm interested in seeing how Sidney's going to react to both Emily and Ashley. He is a guy, and guys are stupid sometimes and only care about looks and getting some, so I'm sure he's going to be into Ashley haha, even though I'm personally rooting for Emily! Anyways, I'll stop my ranting now and just end by telling you I'm looking forward to reading more! :)
grrr ashley seems like a puck slut ): which kinda makes me sad because she seems sweet. I really like Emily and I hope Sidney doesn't fall for Ashley's devious ways! Please update(:
I love this so far. I saw the movie Just Wright, so I am super excited for this story. I know that I am not going to like Ashley but in all honestly, she doesn't know any better. Cannot wait for more!