Kinda agree with shorty girl but it's still good tho (: Very interesting & weird how "Nora" found out where they were :o And I'm glad I can make you happy (:
Constructive Criticism: You seem to be speeding through this story. Its very unrealistic for someone to get over rape like that. Its somewhat unorganized
I am OBSESSED with this story. The plot is fantastic- I love where it's going, and you are a fantastic writer! Every time I get an email update about this story, I get so excited! I love it! Keep going!