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    :) Thank you
    August 24th, 2011 at 02:57am
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    This was so cute weh. I liked the fight scene, I'm all out for stuff like that and it was amazing @.@ and Alex is so cute >.<
    August 24th, 2011 at 02:40am
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    You'll see :) that's in the next chapter :)
    August 10th, 2011 at 01:01am
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    Yay loved it, update soon :D
    and why Alex no let her come to Hustler meeting? :c
    August 9th, 2011 at 11:51pm
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    :) I liked writing it :D
    August 8th, 2011 at 02:50pm
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    Ooh I love it c: and i can't believe he kissed her O_O
    August 8th, 2011 at 02:31pm
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    I was actually listening to the song when I was writing the story so that how it came into this chapter :)
    August 7th, 2011 at 06:00pm
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    Stupid Alex is stupid -.- but mise loved it. I have to stop using irish in sentences. But I like how youu incorporated the song That Girl in it :D it fit perfectly!
    August 7th, 2011 at 04:21am
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    I will :) I'm glad you like it :)
    August 6th, 2011 at 04:25pm
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    yes! and i loved it :D i like Jack at the beginning being all "wear this!" xD
    Update soon, it's awesome :D
    August 6th, 2011 at 03:04pm
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    Okay never mind I got it now :3
    August 5th, 2011 at 02:28pm
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    like this? Hannah's outfir
    August 5th, 2011 at 02:28pm
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    like this? Hannah's outfir
    August 5th, 2011 at 02:28pm
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    It was really good :D for the links you can do this..

    [URL=the link here]whatever the link is[/URL]
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    Kori's outfit you know?
    August 5th, 2011 at 12:02am
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    I like it :D it's good to start a story off with drama and that's what I like. Don't rush into the story too much though, you know? Drag it out a little, it'll make your chapters longer (: btw add the contest link to the long description! Thank you for submitting!
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:17pm
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