Saying You Loved Me, Made Things Harder At Best - Comments

Hi there =)
I'm usually one of those awful, silent readers, but I like this too much to keep my mouth shut.
You're a wonderful author, I've read some of your other stories as well, and I simply adore the way you write. Chapter 3 of this story actually brought me to tears, which is a rarity because I really don't cry over things, even real things that happen to me.
Also, I love the fact that this is RayLove! Ray & Mikey are my two favourites, but I have a godawful time finding any story about Ray, let alone a good one!
I'm eagerly looking forward to your next update! Meanwhile, are there any other RayLove fics on mibba you can point me toward?
XOXO

You have no idea how happy I got when I saw you had updated this!
And even though it wasn't a happy chapter, I still liked it. I think you did a great job writing it. It had a lot of feelings going on for sure!
I think it sucks that they broke up :'( but I'm also sure that you know what you're doing!
With that said, I will just wait for the forth (and last D:) chapter! xoxo *HUUUUUGS*

O.o

that was... like... just like my first kiss

except there was tongue. and no tears. well, almost, cuz I was about to cry if she didn't hurry up and fuckin' kiss me already, but even when she did I was so shocked that I just kinda trembled for a long time and made big crazy gaspy noises and was shocked and very happy and finally bit her lip because I've always wanted to do that and there was TONGUE and it tasted reeeally good...

you didn't need to know that XD

sadness. weird how I see nothing in Ray anymore...

awwh so sad but so amazin cant wait to read the last bit x

Seriously! Freaking update goddamn it!!! I will love you forever and ever! xD

Whoa, wait, what, were there two chapters when I first read this and I missed one or what? I'm so confused.

Dude. I. Am. So. Fucking. Jealous. I try and try and TRY to write a real, legitimate, graphic sex scene and all I get are fucking repeats of Chapter 37. UGH. NOT FAIR.

Oi.

MELIKES!!!! *noms*

*dance*

I love that you're writing a Ray-story! As i said to you when we talked earlier - there's not enough of them!
The way you writes is just awesomeness [with a rainbow-colored unicorn on top]! ;D
I want to read more of this! Ray is such a sweetheart. I'm all like gkfjlcxfdlgnfnjgfxsilgjks,ds... HI! XD

Update soon and i'll give you a cookie? *puppy eyes* pweaseeeee?
You rock (in case you forgot that) and i'll talk to you soonish! [hopefully before i leave tmrw]
Byeeees for now! *hugs* <3

omg second chapter amazing anyone who says you suck at any aspect of writing is blind you are amazing can't wait for more xx

EEEEEEBP!
SEXYTIME!

I envy you for your ability to write stuff like this. At some point in the future (in the next few months, actuallly), i'm going to have to, and that's going to go SO well judging by my lack of experience. Ahaaa, yeah.

D'AWWWWS, THEY MAKIN' SUCH A CUTE COUPLE!
But they said forever...but will It?
I don't think it will be forever...
Something will happen..
WHAT WILL HAPPEN!?
OH GOD.

SAVE ME FROM MY MISERY AND UPDATE!

It's ok, i'm kidding :) I don't mind suffering in wait. Take your time :')
LOVE YOU LYZSIBEEEE!!!! *squeezy hugs*

you should make a career out of writing stories for ray xx

RRAAAAYLLOOVVEEEE<3<3<3

I love this! I more than often find it hard to read one shots/two shots/three shots, whatever shots when it has a storyline, but this is awesome! They're so sweet! It's like, awkward but cute at the same time xD And ooooh! I can't wait to see what's coming up...what's this, sexytime, breakups, bumping into each other years later...this could be good :}

(WELL OF COURSE IT'S GONNA BE GOOD, LYZSI'S WRITING IT)
-goes back to our conversation on msn-
hehehehe ^ ^ xo