The Scars to Prove It - Comments

  • actuallycapamerica

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    Me gusta :) I love how you described the densities pressure, did you get that from the book, or... Very nice pair of chapters :) I do apologize for the lack of commenting for the last chapter, I have been busy lately.....
    September 14th, 2012 at 05:51am
  • Onyxmoon

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    It's good, though i do feel sorry for Fred. This chapter also makes me wonder what's going to happen between Carina and Cedric!!! But good Chapter! Mr. Green
    September 10th, 2012 at 12:48am
  • JustThinking

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    A gold star and Onyxmoon agreed with me on my last comment? I think my day just got a little better ^^ So she wants to be a healer? That's cool. I hope she'll do it. Hmm.. Farren and Oliver are broken up? And they are still cuddlely? This will be a long year for Fred indeed! Hmm.. Good chapter. Smile
    September 8th, 2012 at 02:58pm
  • Onyxmoon

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    I have to agree with JustThinking it's a nice change to have someone supporting Black even with her not knowing she's right about him.
    September 5th, 2012 at 12:22am
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    It is good, so I hope it passes.. Hmm.. I like how black has a supporter without knowing it. Carina is very correct in her assumptions. Hmm.. Good chapter. Smile
    September 4th, 2012 at 12:45pm
  • NotDangerous

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    I kind of forgot this website existed since the first big change it had, and I didn't even know you two had continued this over the summer. It was nice to have all of that to read, and it was fantastic. The only thing is, what disease did Farren's mom have? I'm thinking Alzheimer's, but you never mentioned it for sure. Ehh. Keep cranking out chapters.
    Just in case you've forgotten me, "AND SUDDENLY BOOM"
    September 3rd, 2012 at 08:12am
  • Onyxmoon

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    I have to say I only found this story today as I was going through them all. But once I started reading I could not stop. I do love this story it's amazing to say the least!!!! Smile
    August 30th, 2012 at 05:22am
  • Peace Dreamer

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    This story just keeps getting better and better. Farren is so strong, especially after losing her mother like that. I love how the Weasley's just rolled in the funeral home in weird attire despite being surrounded by Muggles. You gotta love 'em! :) I was wondering if George was going to start to notice Carina. With Fred wanting Farren, it would seem perfectly logical. I loved his comment about selling Fred's broom before letting Carina drop out. :) I hope I'm able to comment earlier next time though college started up again so I don't know about anything right now.
    August 28th, 2012 at 04:31am
  • actuallycapamerica

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    Ohmigosh! That was the cutest chapter xD It really was :) Update soon please!!!
    August 25th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • JustThinking

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    I don't know why you are so unhappy with it, it's a good chapter. A but sad that her family pretty much took everything, but it's to e expected right about now I think. Hmmm... George is noticing Carina? That's kind of good and bad. Good because Carina is awesome and all that, bad because last thing she knew about a crush of his, it was Farren.. Hmm.. Yep good chapter indeed.
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    August 25th, 2012 at 09:37am
  • actuallycapamerica

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    When I saw the chapter title I knew what was going to happen, right then I got sad and all. I love the way you wrote the chapter though. Update soon, yea?
    August 13th, 2012 at 11:32pm
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    I was wondering when she would pass.. And I'm actually not surprised that carina saw through her. She's a girl and her best friend. A best friend somehow mostly always knows:. Somehow. Hmmm.. I wonder what will be next for the little group. Good chapter. Smile

    Hehe, just because of reasons? xD
    August 11th, 2012 at 01:53pm
  • Moldy Voldie

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    I'll do anything for a free unicorn
    August 5th, 2012 at 07:22am
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    Free unicorns? Oh boy! Hehe x) so it's too late to change things? That will probably ruin some things for her and so on. At least with some bad much that is. I wonder if that will be right or not.. Hmm.. Good chapter. Smile
    August 4th, 2012 at 10:53pm
  • actuallycapamerica

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    This was a really good chapter. Carina, Fred and George are all so cute together, I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
    August 4th, 2012 at 07:23pm
  • actuallycapamerica

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    This was seriously an amazing chapter! Update soon! <3
    August 1st, 2012 at 11:33pm
  • JustThinking

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    There's nothing to forgive. Anyways, so second book done. I wonder what will be next for them this summer and next school year. Farren and her mother. Carina and her feelings of being left out from time to time. I'm glad that she stood up to Lucious.. Vile man... Hmm.. Room of requirement, cool. Wonder of they will ever know they actually found it.. Good chapters.
    August 1st, 2012 at 12:06am
  • Peace Dreamer

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    They found the Room of Requirement! When one of the twins said that they could have died, I read it in Molly's voice. :] Oh no, I hope Farren's mother hasn't died without Farren there. That would be devastating for her! :'(
    July 31st, 2012 at 09:50am
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    Poor Fred and George. That's how I imagined they would react to Ginny being possessed. I love how Carina stood up to Lucius. I hope the Weasley family isn't being targeted all because of Carina being friends with them!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 11:00pm
  • actuallycapamerica

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    yes yesyesyes yes yes yes. this updat makes me happppyyy! lol, Update soon!
    July 21st, 2012 at 06:51am