Sharing Pillows and Cold Feet - Comments

  • lifeisprettyodd

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    -comment swap-
    "I hope his songs start playing in elevators." This, I just. I can only imagine what it would be like to hear his song in an elevator. That line was extremely clever, I love it.

    And this was in part one: I might should 'break it off' with Alex.

    I'm not sure, but do you mean maybe?

    And normally, I don't read this bands fanfic, but I really enjoyed this :)
    November 23rd, 2012 at 01:19am
  • Zombiex13

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    Okay so I'm just gonna be honest. . . I'm that creeper who still thinks oldschool mcr and the used are awesome. There. I said it. hah. So I usually read that type of junk and I have no idea who these people are. . . that said; this story is fucking amazing. You have the kind of writing style that makes me just want to smile a lifetime because it's so good. I love this. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world; I thought if I read one more badly written fanfic I would just lose my whole brain. hah. So thanks for making it better.[: keep up the good work! xo
    June 16th, 2012 at 06:40am
  • Zombiex13

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    Okay so I'm just gonna be honest. . . I'm that creeper who still thinks oldschool mcr and the used are awesome. There. I said it. hah. So I usually read that type of junk and I have no idea who these people are. . . that said; this story is fucking amazing. You have the kind of writing style that makes me just want to smile a lifetime because it's so good. I love this. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world; I thought if I read one more badly written fanfic I would just lose my whole brain. hah. So thanks for making it better.[: keep up the good work! xo
    June 16th, 2012 at 06:40am
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    Okay so I'm just gonna be honest. . . I'm that creeper who still thinks oldschool mcr and the used are awesome. There. I said it. hah. So I usually read that type of junk and I have no idea who these people are. . . that said; this story is fucking amazing. You have the kind of writing style that makes me just want to smile a lifetime because it's so good. I love this. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world; I thought if I read one more badly written fanfic I would just lose my whole brain. hah. So thanks for making it better.[: keep up the good work! xo
    June 16th, 2012 at 06:40am
  • Acee.

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    It's not often I read slash, but this was actually really good. If more people had this writing style, slash fanfiction would be so much more addicting for me. The way you wrote this was amazing, and it definitely kept the reader interested. I don't know all too much about either of the bands involved, but I have listened to some of their music. Thanks to this, I'm actually inspired to look into them a little more. I also intend to read more of your work. Good job (:
    June 16th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • invisible secrecy.

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    To be honest I don't really read slash. It creeps me out in a way. However I do like this one for the humour especially the scene where Kennedy and Garrett were featuring. In case you didn't notice I love love love loveeeeeeee Kennedy Brock to the max. The fact of him appearing in one of the scenes made me smile for no reason. And I love how you made his personality be like it was in this story. It's just gaaaaah.
    June 15th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • eric james halvorsen

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    why did i just saw this?! EVERYONE NEEDS TO WRITE MORE JOHN/HALVO.
    October 4th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • nolongeractive.

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    THIS STORY IS SEX. PURE VIRGIN SEX.
    which is good. :3
    so UPDATE.
    Halvo just acts like me in this, so I love him. <3
    JOHN IS SO FUCKING CUTE, LIKE FJDKLJFASL;
    okay, I'm done.
    UPDATE.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 06:57pm