Welcome in Silence - Comments

just reread this story cause i saw it in my subscriptions and i soo want the next chapter up i love this story. cant wait on the next one :)

next please :) have fun writing :)

Aw. The chapter was sweet. Jacob was reading to her. Please update soon?

update soon ?

GREAT!!! Update soon please!

good story!! update soon please?

xxMorgan

i knew jacob would win that bet. so sweet that jacob imprinted on her.
update soon?

i really like this so far.
Update soon?

i love the story, but you should have explained why she became mute in the first place!! Does someone imprint on her?!

This is interesting so far. I've read a few stories like this, but I'm into the werewolf scene so I keep reading them. :) You have many grammatical errors. Most of your dialogue needs punctuation.

Chapter 1
"What's..cousins" What is or What's, cousin's
"Its not.." Can be 'It is not or It isn't"

Chapter 2
"...and a pushed..." Take out the 'a'
"after we..." After should be capitalized.
"...Trent side.." Trent's side
[I...]pointing to Trent butt since she was still..."[/i ]should be "..pointing to Trent, who was still over my shoulder."
"oh, right" "Oh" should be capitalized.
Your a girl! Should be "You're a girl!"

Chapter 3
"I am, not.." no comma needed
"What gave it away my boobs or ability to think" Should be "What gave it away? My boobs...think?" And then again when Embry repeats it.
"It complicated" should be It's or It is complicated.
since she's.. should be she's
glared art should be glared at
"..said stopped mid" stopping mid

Hope this helps with some of the errors.

:)

I love it! Update soon please!!!!!!!!

Good so far update soon!

I like it, update soon?! :]