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@ wither

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I really really enjoyed this! I have to say that this was once of the most unique formats I've seen in my mibba days and that alone was enough to push me to read on. I've never read a sexting fic before (I'm personally awful at sexting) so your use of language was definitely impressive and I have to admit, the picture at the top made me giggle. Overall amazing job, I can't wait to read more of your pieces!

I thought this started off really cute, and I love the way the two of them kept joking about James. I thought it added a nice touch because it made it so the story wasn't just about the two characters and showed they had other things going on in their lives. And the part about the informercials was really funny too, just because it's so true.
I thought you did a good job of transitioning from the playful stuff into the sexting stuff by using the bed bit, and I especially enjoyed that she was talking about how she wasn't going to sext him.

I've never seen a story told completely through texts, and I honestly quite like it; its unique :). I also love Kandi's character and how she's flirty yet sweet yet sarcastic; shes a good mix of traits. And their relationship is odd, its obviously based around sex but I feel like it was once a friendship and could definitely lead up to more. Great story so far!

Interesting story indeed, first time I have read a sexting fic so I didnt know what to expect. As the person below me has said, writing smut from the POV of two people is quite difficult, but you did this very well XD

I really, really liked this! The play-on-words in the title led me to think that the format of this might've been a little different to what I was used to but I was pleasantly surprised! Though I've never tried it, I can imagine that it is quite difficult to write smut from the point of view of two different people, though I think you have done it particularly well! xx

We meet again, for the fourth time XD. I expected somethign good and i got it. I never read something in text format before, and so at first i was a little sketchy at the idea of sexting fic. but this was again amazingly written, and i really enjoyed. I shouldn't of been surprised so i apologies for ever doubting you. Nice simple layout as always and the entire thing was well put together XD

Wow I really enjoyed that. More than I thought I would anyway.
One of the best written and formated sexting fics I've ever come across.
I was slightly surprised at how well it came across as well.
From what I can tell you're a pretty awesome writer so keep it up, okay?

Wow I really enjoyed that. More than I thought I would anyway.
One of the best written and formated sexting fics I've ever come across.
I was slightly surprised at how well it came across as well

Woah! Okay, so, this is the first sexting fiction I've read, and I'm very impressed with this one. When I first saw the title, I was like, "oh my god, what have I gotten myself into", but when I read it, I was more like, "oh my god! I love this!"
This is probably my favorite fanfiction right now. I seriously loved this! I mean, you even use a lot of detail in this! Great work!

For the All Dialogue Contest:

First Impressions:

title- the title's cute and I didn't really connect it with any sort of sexting, but that's what it's about...

layout- it's cute too. Very pleasant to look at.

Content:

general plot stuff- I said I would allow anything in this contest because I thought you couldn't have sex through dialogue only. I was wrong. Honestly, I'm not a big fan of this sort of thing because I've got an innocent mind, so this was... Uhm, yeah. This was... different. Also, another awkward thing with this story is that my best gal pal's name is Logan. Do you get the weirdness there? However, the first half with the cute banter was... well, cute. :) I liked that part. I just didn't appreciate the last half as much as an older audience would.

grammar/crap they teach you in the fifth grade- Looks like you're home free. No mistakes from what I could tell. :)

Overall:

Welp, I know you're a good writer and you've certainly got talent, but I just don't dig sexting. :/ Sorry...

so i have to admit, i love the stuff you come up with. i've never read anything like this before and it was great. good job(: