Wait, what the fuck just happened?! Is remus really blaming Snape? Snape don't stay quite! Hex him or something, and leave his dumb ass Please Please Please Update soon
Why must you do this to me with each and every update as of late? There's so much fluff thrown in that makes me all girly and giving into those girlish notions of romance I try so adamantly to refrain from admitting to liking. XD
I'm glad that Draco was the one to take Remus' side in agreeing that him accepting the mission was okay.
I'm also very glad that Remus is back and good grief, that last moment in Chapter 10, Severus simply touching and staring him as he slept, you made me melt a little. XD
Seriously, what's with this making me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside with Severus and Remus? 0.o JK! I'm adoring their growing relationship a lot. I think you're doing a wonderful job at capturing their insecurities, especially Severus'. :)
I believe I'd laugh at the site of Draco's and Hary's room, it sounds ghastly actually. XD Yet so, so them at the same time.
Secondly, I adored this chapter! A lot. I dare say it's my favorite at the moment. XD
I think you did a brilliant job capturing both Severus and Remus in that moment they shared. I also felt like it was the first chapter you let them tell the story instead of trying to do it as yourself (if that makes sense?). I don't think Severus is being a coward, Remus was right in calling him noble, if only to mock him ('cause that's how I took it). Made me think of the line where Dumbledore told Sev about having to never reveal the best of him. Ya know? I don't think he's being a coward, sure it can be seen as him hiding behind his walls and defense mechanisms for keeping people out, but sometimes it takes a brave person to remain that lonely...granted, I do think he's being a bit daft in not letting Remus in. Just sayin'. They're both broken in ways that the other would compliment them perfectly, and if not, they're not afraid to express their honesty (they did it when they were younger). Or so that's my opinion anyway.
Astronomy, ::le sigh::, it's always seemed to be a "romantic" subject to me. It's beautiful and captivating and overwhelming and makes you realize how small you really are. Plus it's a great way to share personal space with someone else at night time. XD
Again, I cannot wait for the next bit! :) Apologies for my 'novel' of a comment. :P
Amyartkittentm: If you thought the last chapter was sweet, read the new one I just put up. It's full of sappiness, haha.
KClear: I felt like I had to write a story where he survived because of the way they killed him off. He was a spy for years and managed to fool Voldemort. He was a brilliant Potions Master, yet he didn't have a second plan or any healing potions on him. It just didn't make any sense to me >.<
Is remus really blaming Snape?
Snape don't stay quite!
Hex him or something, and leave his dumb ass
Please Please Please
Update soon