October 26th, 2011 at 10:30pm
The layout was brilliant, like everything.
You captured so much emotion in only 163 words.
I don't do well with grammar, so I have nothing to say with that.
I throughly enjoyed this.
Now off to comment your other stories. (:
Just perfect. Your layout was so simple but fitting, and the emotion conveyed was amazing.
I love how it was both stream-of-consciousness and perfectly connected at the same time.
I will marry you. <3