Hahahahahahahaha with the way Gerard was being a pissy bitch one would assume Mikey is, like, a prostitute, or something... Yeah, I knoooow... That was the general idea...
...............It's over? shit, it's over?! BLOW WHAT THE FUCK YOU CAN'T DO THIS. no wait, you can. fucking shit. anyway. You are sooooo good at this!!! keep the good work up! ..oh holy shit that sounded dirty. I mean, you know, writing. keep the writing up. :D
I decided I'd transfer my comment through email here so other readers can see my reactions XD Let the public know that I wrote this last night BEFORE the story was actually put up so there may be things where you just go.. huh?? haha :)
OMIGAWD I just finished it and it was amazing!!! I seriously sat there and refused to believe Mikey's job was something bad (like giving random strangers blow jobs) I will have to say that you did a GREAT job at creating the illusion that Mikey was really doing something horriblly wrong because of how upset poor Gerard was.... Then again it was hilarious to read
I hate needles. I hate people. I hate blood. I hate pain.
I Shudder.
How could Mikey do something as gross as a tattoo artist.
It just made me go "Oh Gerard, you silly silly man! Here you are making me think Mikey is going to get like an STD or something XD" Anyways like I said I started out refusing to believe it was sexual bad or deadly bad but the longer the story got the more I started to doubt my own will power to NOT believe the oh so obvious clues, but soon as you said:
“Mikey!” Gee says staring at Franks neck.
“Did a good Job, didn’t he?” Frank said optimistically, moving his hand over the dark tender area.
Gerard's’ eyes narrowed at Franks neck before turning to me.
I immediately thought TATTOO!!! MIKEY WAY IS A TATTOO ARTIST!!! Then I thought that Gerard was over exaggerating a bit too much for something so silly, but of course after some thought that this IIIISSSS a fanfiction, he is allowed to over exaggerate! So then I decided that Gee's fear of needles truly made him look at being a tattoo artist the worst job ever and Mikey wasn't doing the dirty with random strangers for money XD I will have to say that this was just brilliant and you didn't disappoint (as if you could disappoint anyways :}) so a big gold star for you XD I can't wait until you put this up along with your upcoming sequel and I really look forward to anything else you've got because seeing as you are one of the very few male writers I see, you are definately one of the best... rephrase... of here, you ARE the best male writer I've ever read from XD ahaha Letting me know when you put this up on your page so I can set a link in my updates, new stories, profile page, and basically anywhere I can pimp it because 1)hello, it was made for me so I own a part of it (haha jk obviously it is yours! XD) and 2)It is amazing and needs to be seen!!!! Alright I believe I've talked (typed?) enough for one night so I'm off, love ya!!!