A Legacy - Comments

  • animrod

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    Jesus.
    It was so real, so descriptive.
    And such a different way of writing.
    I say you continue, it was beautiful.
    :]
    February 25th, 2008 at 12:38am
  • emily.

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    That was really great; the imagery you wrote in there was descriptive, but not overwhelming, like you were trying to force it on me.

    Awesome.
    February 24th, 2008 at 01:03pm
  • Muffinstars.

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    Beautiful.
    This was really sad to read. I've always tried not to think about them ever breaking up. I don't think I could cope.
    And I know there's a bunch of people on this website who would be like, "oh, they're just a band for christ's sake."
    Bleugh. Off topic.

    Anway. Truly perfect.
    Turning it into a chaptered story could possibly spoil it..

    xox
    February 24th, 2008 at 11:24am