February 25th, 2008 at 12:38am
That was really great; the imagery you wrote in there was descriptive, but not overwhelming, like you were trying to force it on me.
Awesome.
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February 24th, 2008 at 01:03pm
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Beautiful.
This was really sad to read. I've always tried not to think about them ever breaking up. I don't think I could cope.
And I know there's a bunch of people on this website who would be like, "oh, they're just a band for christ's sake."
Bleugh. Off topic.
Anway. Truly perfect.
Turning it into a chaptered story could possibly spoil it..
xoxFebruary 24th, 2008 at 11:24am
It was so real, so descriptive.
And such a different way of writing.
I say you continue, it was beautiful.
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