October 23rd, 2012 at 06:22pm
I'm sorry, but... I can't not compare 'In that moment, I decided I wanted him.' to that scene in Wonder Boys.
Because, seriously.
"... I'm gonna fuck this kid."
That is the expression I saw.
No, but, in all seriousness -- okay, you know what? You get a real comment tomorrow when you're not distracting me with entirely inappropriate text messages, because I have been typing this comment for one hour and look at how far I've gotten.
So, I'll go into depth, later, yeah?
Excellent.
“July, I want you to marry me.” and her reply? Guh. That hurt. This is just so... different from what I usually read. July is so cold, but I want everything to work out for her. I want her to be happy. You've made me sympathise with her, so well done.
I really can't wait for the next update.
Oh, and your sex scene was very tasteful :) It was passionate rather than sexy (and, yes, that is a compliment ).