July 8th, 2017 at 01:12am
Brilliant work, I really do love this story!
Jack is such a sweetheart :)
I'm Gonna Be Bad for You, Tonight - Comments
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May 15th, 2012 at 11:25pm
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Seriously am I the only person in here commenting? I love the drama. I can't say for who of them I would go though.November 24th, 2011 at 06:08pm
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Ahh cliffhanger! Please update soon.November 2nd, 2011 at 01:33pm
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Great story :)
I feel sorry for her, Jack being a stupid... person and all.
I'm tired, sorry, I can't come up with a better name then that ._.
But I can't wait for the next chapter :POctober 23rd, 2011 at 01:25pm -
I feel lame commenting four times in a row but I am so hooked on this story. The most unexpected things happen!October 21st, 2011 at 09:16pm
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Funny how things with Alex haven't stopped yet and with Jack, they're just starting out.October 14th, 2011 at 12:19am
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There are some but I like it anyway. Super curious how things between her, Jack and Alex are going to develop.October 4th, 2011 at 08:45pm
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You're giving me girl boners!September 26th, 2011 at 08:13pm
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love this update again soon please ! :DSeptember 6th, 2011 at 10:22pm
I was thinking this was going to be an Alex story, so I'm a little disappointed that it turned into a Jack one. Maybe there's still opportunity to change that, though, who knows? lol, she seemed so back and forth with both of them. But I stuck around reading because I do enjoy the characters/plot line. Jamie's been through a lot and she deserves to finally find love.
If you ever choose to pick this up again, I will be here to read. Bummed that it was never finished. :/ But I think this story definitely deserves an ending, especially considering how much you wrote for it. Even if it's just a short wrap-up to it or something.
It was a bit hard to follow at times with the grammar, but I kept in mind you said about not being a native English speaker. And even considering that, I thought you did great with writing this. That isn't easy. Other than a few things being off, everything flowed pretty well for it not being your native language. :)
But yeah, just wanted to leave feedback letting you know people like me are still stumbling across your story, and enjoying it and reading it. :) I will be here if you choose to pick it up again. Also, if you start any new stories with ATL and Alex as the love interest, let me know. I would be happy to read it. Think you're a great writer. :)