Under Lock and Key - Comments

I very much love it, the plot is new, and I like it. Update soon?

purely terrific.

Awesome chapter! I loved the description of Hell that you did put in and it was just awesome! Ooo! Dean! Ahh! Can't wait for the update!

Awesome fanficiton. I like the fact that Laurelai's so spectacularly spunky. And the prologue was amazing, all tension and alluring. Brilliant :)

BAHAHAHA! This chapter was hilarious!

"Go to your room." lmao I loved it! I can see Cas saying that! The conversations, the glares, everything was awesome!!

Can't wait for an update!!! :D

Layout
I agree with Filthy Tongue on the whole 'bar on the left is contrasting' bit. It's too light compared to the rest of the layout and slightly distracts me from the main picture. Overall, it looks really good - I especially love the main picture, it's amazing.

Summary
The summary left me wanting more and wondering what the story was going to be about. So, it's very good.

Chapter I
The prologue is intriguing. Interesting. It's good. And the Scripture is a good touch to it - considering Supernatural is all about Angels and Demons ^^ The prologue makes me wonder, 'what's going to happen?' - so, honestly, I love it.

Chapter II
Chapter II was interesting. It doesn't reveal much about Laurelai, so that makes me want to find out more about her. But there's only two chapters coming from her perspective >_> And it makes me wonder how Cas is going to deal with her.

Chapter III
Chapter III was just... wow. I didn't realize that she was a demon, I actually thought she was being hunted by a demon. The description is wonderful and I love the beginning.

Chapter IV
The beginning of the chapter was fun to read. I loved it. And then her being introduced to the Winchester's - it's awesome. And Cas is hilarious. I love how you've portrayed him.

Keep writing - I can't wait to read Chapter V.

I love supernatrual and I love how the story was well written and elegant. I love the layout.
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I'm not going to lie, this made me laugh.:3 I ma not know much or have seen very many episodes of Supenatural, but this is one hilarious fic I liked it and Schiz, you did well portraying Cas like that. Ghostie, your chapter was hilarious too. Anyways, I liked the lay out and the funny start that you two have come up with. Now I'm interested in what's gonna happen next. :3

Angel, now demon. Oooo! This is gonna be good!! I loved your way of writing, simple, yet descriptive. You kept me on the edge of my seat. I loved! :D

Holy crap you got Cas perfect! I was dying I was laughing so hard! XD

This was quite lovely. I especially liked it because I haven't read something that was so modernly realistic and funny :3 I haven't ever seen Supernatural but this is a story to sub to. I also love te scriptures. They give a good umph to the beginning. :))

Okay, that is me above too. ^ I forgot to log out of my friend's account. xP

Loved the new chapter! I will really enjoy this, I know! Ah, Cas!! He is the shiz! I love him!!! xD

OMG! So excited for this!

The summary was drawing me in and the layout is very cool. :) The first chapter has just sucked me into this story like a vaccume! :D

Can't wait for more!

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Layout
I think the little bar you have on the left is a bit contrasting to the whole dark theme you have going. But other then that it looks really good. I really like the pictures, it's so awesome :D

Summary
The summary has me intrigued, I wonder what the whole story is about now. Demons or witches, why would they need to depend on someone to save them? I am really curious to read the first chapter and I think at "Under lock and Key" there needs to be a comma after and...I THINK I could be wrong though.

Chapter
The little scripture you have in the beginning is fairly interesting, it has revealed a little to me but not a whole lot. Oh wtf man D: I wanna read more I WANT to make sense of all this. I love the way you worded everything it seems so ....like a legend of sorts. I can't wait for more.