Layout: Gorgeous! Loved it sooo much (: Content: I liked how you wrote this. My favorite part was when you were describing Dedrick, and how he changed so much. I didn't catch that many mistakes, so good job on that. Song: I liked how you changed what most people would've wrote about this, and took the more religious route. I would've thought it would've been more of a suicide-type story, so it was nice, different read.
Layout: Gorgeous! Loved it sooo much (:
Content: I liked how you wrote this. My favorite part was when you were describing Dedrick, and how he changed so much. I didn't catch that many mistakes, so good job on that.
Song: I liked how you changed what most people would've wrote about this, and took the more religious route. I would've thought it would've been more of a suicide-type story, so it was nice, different read.
Good luck, and thanks for entering in my contest!